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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 48)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Her husband is a complete jerk. How can he do this to her.
Eager to know how virat and manvi's meeting will go. Continue soon.

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Superb update... HATE HATE HATE... tht viren way too much... How dare he cme bck again!!! But they say tht, everything happens fr a good reason.. nd its true viren wrked as a fates puppet to get our "pyare" virman meet each other.. So ths time im forgiving him.. Virat is already feeling smething smething aftr talking to manvi on phone..awww.. nd they r finally face to face.. th last line was awsm.. Waiting fr hot shot updts nd Virens murder eagerly, so cont soon pyarii behena meri... thnks fr th pm bag..

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilaonmoon

Superb update... HATE HATE HATE... tht viren way too much... How dare he cme bck again!!! But they say tht, everything happens fr a good reason.. nd its true viren wrked as a fates puppet to get our "pyare" virman meet each other.. So ths time im forgiving him.. Virat is already feeling smething smething aftr talking to manvi on phone..awww.. nd they r finally face to face.. th last line was awsm.. Waiting fr hot shot updts nd Virens murder eagerly, so cont soon pyarii behena meri... thnks fr th pm bag..
LOL behna who said you that VIren will be murdered??? ha ha ha ROFL  
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update
i hate viren
finally virat maanvi met
loved it
plz cont soon

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
nice update please do continue soon thanks for the pm

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
wow u update SINNERS yayyyDancing
vi..vi..virat???she asked...yes vi..vi..virat at ur service
aik to wise he bechare itne nervous ha uppar se virat aur uslo nervous kar raha haLOL
oh threesome but it will cost doubleROFL n he said this professionally ROFL
virat n that ceo lady's convo is also waow kia attitude aur style hai wahh
so restless just after a mere call of manvi interestingCool
manvi's feelings r so natural she's thinking or shocked that *did she just called a gigolo*
virenAngry thank god his flight just got delayed not cancelled
at first i thougt that viren is now good but after that airport scene how dare he slap her infrnt of everyone i mean now suddenly he isnt concerned about his image n then also apologizes her oh waow thats so great n humble of him na hate hate hate him
love virats way of saying *u r one con...whispered...fused soul*
now regerly wants to know virats pov on seeing manviEmbarrassed
i will not say cont soon but will say
UPDATE ASAPLOL

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
wow...superb update...ClapClap 

His colleagues suppressed their laughter looking down, which didn't go unnoticed by Viren. He came towards her and slapped her hard, in the entrance of airport. Everyone looked at them shocked. Angry

"Thank god you at last opened it. You really are a con'" he turned and saw her, "fused soul" he whispered. LOL


Finally Virman ka milan...wow...please update soonnn...Day Dreaming

thanks for the pm...






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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome update yaar tooo good...
Loved it...
Finally Virman meet...
Pleaseee continue soon..
Thanks for your PM...

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