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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 47)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roses-khushi

grt update
thanks khushi Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:54am | IP Logged
update where is the update

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nanditam2107

Do you know what??? I day viren will die from my hands if he come in front of meAngry(only this viren who is in your story, otherwise i love viren in the serialTongueWink)

I mean how can a person be so cruel!!!! God!!! Manvi's friend was so right that she should set herself free from this marriage!!! And when manvi came back, viren slapped her!!! God, he is such an animalAngryAngry

Thank god he has left for Toronto & now yesss...manvi has called viratDancing
Do you know what my heart is so restless right now, it will only get normal when manvi will find her comfort with virat!!! i am waiting for that moment when virat would love her, take care of her, the time when she will actually know about how love is!!!

You write so well that you steal heart man!!!Smile
Just amazing!!! Superb!!! Please update soonSmile
your description about love, about how virat can make her feel loved was amazing... Embarrassed loved them Embarrassed  
Keep reading n commenting
I am loving ur comment Wink

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kusharberry

i have actual got really did viren love her anyways i loved ur update so much and thanks for the pmSmile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana24

hate viren in this story.
OMG manvi called Virat.
update soon.
updating
thanks Embarrassed
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetmanu

Amazing update Preity .. Loved the way story is progressing.. So Viren's parents live in USA but his granny lives with them.. Oh I loved the name 'honeybee'.. So sweet .. The conversation between Manvi and granny is very well written .. Atleast someone is there for her.. Granny is aware of Manvi's pain.. But she is helpless .. I loved the way you have described that .nyc update...thanxxx 4 d pm
Thanks dear..Embarrassed... I loved ur long comment and I am sure u liked it by heart
updating Wink
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daydreamer9

sorry for not reading your stories earlier.this is what i'm feeling like to do.


i've read the two parts.they're amazing.always wondered why those upper class s**ts opt for male prostitutes.but if this is how their married life is... i feel real sorry for them.

i know virat's hot n all.but a gigolo?i don't know.i'm super excited for this story now.Big smile

p.s.i promise i'll read your other stories too.coz i know they'll be super great too.
Don't hit ur head and run to read them (a better idea Wink)
 Thanks ... Embarrassed  keep reading Big smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged
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OMG guys, so much long comments, I took more than half an hour just to replying you all Embarrassed  Love you guys... Hug 
Keep reading and commenting like that WinkLOLEmbarrassed  to ensure the next part SOONWink Tongue LOL

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