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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 46)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

aahhh...what a beautiful start my fruity ,
seriously could imagine everything ,
perfect description of the scene ...
u r too amazing ...wo cotton seed wala scene padke itna acha laga k kya batau ...
it was really amazing ...
now coming to viren ...urghhh ...man i hate him so much ...itna cruel ...

awesome update fruity ...u r doing a wonderful job fruity ...hats off to u ...

love you ,
your bolto carrot !!! hahahahaha...
Thanks my Carrot Embarrassed 
Thanks I am glad everyone liked that cotton seed part Big smile
The next is coming, hope fully u will be able to read Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lalmirch

awesome plzz update soon n pm me
ok will pm u, thanks
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimanair09

Continue sooon
Eager to read itSmile
Thanks Embarrassed
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie2244

Ita really very great.. m really loving this story as its unfolding bit by bit n greatly...

Again viren forced on her.. so y she married to him???

Finally he called vi.. vi..virat... waooo

Dear update soon...
Before marriage how could a girl know that her husband is going to turn into an animal, thats why she married her

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virman223

Abhi to virat story main aya bhi Nahin ache see par mujhe to Abhi see pyaar ho gaya hai usse manvi ko ho ya n.a. ho the dialogue vi..vi ...virat was amazing I liked granny and manvi convo and just hate that viren he is such a psycho use mental asylum kyun Nahin chord ate. I loved the way u described with a cotton seed it was amazing thanx for the pm and cont ssoon
Haww... Virat lover LOLLOLLOL   Thanks for appreciating the dialogue, I really very happy that you liked the dialogue Embarrassed  many people in this earth are psychic and living in their house, making other suffer LOLLOLLOL 
Thanks will PM you Big smile  thanks for liking cottoc seed part

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dairymilk12

Love the way u write dear
but I did not like the part where viren turns so animal 
poor mannuCry atleast granny is with her Heart
nice update dear HugThumbs Up
Thanks Hema, yes we don't like many thinks but those things happens,we can't change Ouch 

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ehmmbh01

Hi! I m new to this forum joined few days back...love ur story eagerly waiting for virat's entry Smile
hey welcome to the forumHug   thanks Embarrassed  will pm you Big smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha_virman

supreb update
continue soon 
thank for pm
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