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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 45)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Menzena

Finally, FINALLY FINALLY ... I am so glad that you have FNALLY UPDATED Preeti, I was waiting for sooo long. THANKS SO MUCH FOR UPDATING 
 
This was an amazing update, the whole story is so different and Manvi's friend Aaliya ... WOW LOL!! Ulti patti parha rahi bechari ko.
Viren @~#>?/=+%!!!!!

 How could he ??! I liked the story and character development but what i really want is ...VIRAT's introduction plzzz!!! I love this story so much THANKS !!

Next update karne mein itni der mat laga na. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE CUZ I CAN'T WAITCry
Thanks, Embarrassed  I am happy, you liked it Big smile 
Virat's intro I already gave, now his full entry
in the next, which is coming in few minutes Wink

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandiniebinda

Awesome yaar too good...
Pleasee continue...
Finally Virman will meet...
Thanks for the PM..
Thanks Embarrassed  updating Smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhabani90

Haye why did u stop in vi vi virat, dis is unfair.. Awsum update but pls give it soon.
Thanks Embarrassed  read the next Big smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

resss ROFL
 Unres !! Approve
 OMG OMG OMG !!
U updateddd Hug , m i dreaming or what ??? " Some one plz pinch me " Tongue Tongue Tongue .. and itna late PM kia u ne mjhe Disapprove
Or Itniii centuries k baaadd kOi update krta h kiaaa .. BCHO ko maar diya wait kra kra k CryBig smileTongue  ..
Chal ab Comment PAKROOO Cool
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AaaH !!
The Starting was mind blowing , scene description was awesome .. Or voo GRANNY and daughter-in-law wali emotional conversation main i was like " AwW , they are soo cute Day Dreaming "
And then Cotton seed ki chotti si story Big smile , kaha ja rha h n kaha ni LOL .. i loved that , was soothy Smile
And i have a strong feeling k ye Viraaat h bosss Wink " A man passed by her. She couldn't see him, but she saw his wrist, there was a cotton seed hugging his wrist-watch " ..
Aaliya and maanvi's convo was also nice and worth-reading .. Embarrassed ..
ENDING Shocked , ye koi line ti ending wali Cry ..

Viren Angry Angry .. that jerk , KAMINA kahin ka , i want him to get out from maanvi's life Angry ..
And i want My Viru Boy now .. Next part me surely entry krwana yrrr .. .
Ab esi ending k baaad Next update jaaaldiii kr denaaa .. nii towww Evil SmileBig smileTongue


I am again updating
wake up for another dream WinkLOLLOL 
Ha, next me entry Embarrassed  thanks Big smile  I love ur comment Big smile  keep reading Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by afreenkansal

Awrsome update
Continue soon
Thanks Smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DantaDeepa

Awesum upd keep it up
Thanks deepanwita
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:40am | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artii159

Yay u updated Preity...Dancing thnk u so much 4 updating...n as usual it was an amazing update...luvd 'it...Luvd Maanvi n Honeybee's scene, dat was so cute, so granny is da only 1 who understands n feels Maanvi's pain..Awww...she's sho sweet n cute..really lyk dere relationship...Aaliya n Maanvi's convo was nyc, so Aaliya married a old man...wow..interesting..Smile
Viren is so mean, he actually slapped her in front of da nurse, dat is so rude, I really dn't lyk him..Confused wonder y Maanvi married him in da 1st place...gosh...Thnk god he is leaving her 4 5days...at least she will leave in piece, probably wid Viraat..TongueWinkLOL...
so finally she did call him huh...very gud...Yay so will c Viraat in da nxt update,...I so hope 4 dat...plz plz plz Preity jaldi update karo...plz plz plz...continue real soon, thnks a lot 4 da pm n 4 dis update...continue real soon..plzzz...Big smileSmile
  Living wid a gigolo in peace???
lets see what happens next
thabnks Artii for the long comment
really I am glad Embarrassedyou liked

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