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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 42)

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
update soon

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

Res karna mana hai Wink LOL

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Amazing update Preity StarStarStar.. Loved the way story is progressing.. So Viren's parents live in USA but his granny lives with them.. Oh I loved the name 'honeybee'.. So sweet Big smile.. The conversation between Manvi and granny is very well written ClapClap.. Atleast someone is there for her.. Granny is aware of Manvi's pain.. But she is helpless Disapprove.. I loved the way you have described that scenery she was watching from the window Star.. That cotton seed was flying in the air and all.. Its beautiful Thumbs Up.. Btw who was that guy in that alley?? Wink Ms.Sally sounds fishy Confused.. I don't like her attitude.. Again Mannu saw that a cotton seed was hugging someone's wrist-watch!! Who is he?? ;)  Aaliya-Manvi convo was superb ClapClap.. Both of them are deprived of love.. Aaliya's past is pretty interesting.. I already like her Smile.. Viren- looser, moron, jerk AngryAngryAngry.. I hate him.. How dare he slap Manvi.. And he again forced himself on her.. He doesn't love her at all..  I really want Manvi to kick him hard Approve..Finally Manvi called Virat DancingPartyLOL.. Loved the last line of the update -
"Yes, Vi..Vi..Virat, only for your service."  Embarrassed Koi baat nahi, 'Vi..Vi..Virat' na sahi par uski awaz ki to entry ho gayi na Wink LOL.. Really eager to read the next part.. So please continue soon ROFL.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care Hug Heart
Thank You dear for such a longg comment, your comment always enlightened me... Big smile
The way you described everything in your comment, I am sure that the update touched your heart... n I am happy for that...  Keep reading and praising my two bengali Babu's
Love Preity Hug Heart 

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kulsum_virman

res Tongue
unres
ufff finalyy update kar hi diya aapne dhanya ho aapka  Wink
oye preeto tune mereko dhoka diya bola the next part virat ka hoga par yeh toh manvi aur uss virenAngry ka tha...jab tak hai jaan nai maaf karungi tujhe Cry 
and the update nooo doubt was just awesome kitni asani se itne beautifully likhti hai tu ClapClap
yaar viren sach mein pagal hai pata nai uska pyaar hai ya bombay stock market har minute badalta rehta hai...and pyaar kaisa apni dadi ke nurse ke saath chakkar chala raha hai kamina...Angrysorry for the language Tongue
and that cotton thing woh ladka kaun tha tune uspe itna focus kyun kiya??Confused
and yeh vi..vi..virat kya haiWink pure virat ko lati na toh maza aata...Tongue

next part mein virman meeting excited kaise milenge and manvi karegi kya ...
plzzz preeto iss baar jaldi update kardena yaar Smile
Thank You Kullu-Manali... 
Yes, everyone hating this Viren, Ouch 
Keep reading to know the next Wink 
Thanks for appreciating Embarrassed  love you

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by keertu

finally my mummy updated.LOL
the update was awesome.loved granny and daughter relationship.
manvi hates her name as mrs. viren singh vadhera.
again viren forced her on him.Angry
but u din't introduce virat in tis update.
i want my virat in next update.
finally manvi called VI.VI.VIRATWink
Yes, beta I am going to update the next part... you keep reading and commenting
withdraw all res okka??? WinkBig smile  
mummy loves you beta Heart 
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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by copypaste

tu na tu na urghhh kitna wrong time par roka tu ne Unhappy
Get lost ROFL omg finally she called hm yess yess yess
Finally maanvi called hm i m dancing vi.vi.viraat ke aage kiya hoga ab i knw i knw i knw
Abhi if u didn't cnt sn na thn get lost ROFL
Mujhe 2 days mai update chahiye
Tu apni restlessness ko thoda kam kar LOLLOLLOL  
thoda patience rakkh kuri, sab hoega Wink  

I am updating...  Big smile
thanks for praising Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by virmanfan013

wow preeto tune next update kardi. thank godEmbarrassed
it was such a wonderful update and beautifuly writtenClapClapClap
haww our poor mannu she is tolerating so muchCryCry feeling very bad for her. but kya kar sakte hai yeh sab teri wajah se ho raha haiWink
love the granny and manvi's convo. thank god koi toh hai jo manvi ko khush dekhna chahta hai. again i hate that jerk viren. he is sooo ab kya kahu words hi nahi nkal raheAngry
aliya and manv'is convo was also nice.
and the end wala part toh just muaahHeart
and his dialogue yes vi vi virat at your serviceDay Dreaming
now don't make me wait for next update. nahi toh tum nahi janti ki main kya karungi.
madam jo main kehti hoon woh main karti hoon aur jo main nahi kehti woh main definately karti hoonROFL
ha re shivi maine kar di update WinkLOL 
aur dekh next bhi kar rahi hun
I m very fast
ROFL
Aww you liked that dialogue? thanks re Embarrassed
abb next wala pad Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yaminnthida

This is so awesome preity.. Clap Clap Clap superb update preity... Thumbs Up ...really loved evey bit of it... Star ...bechari manvi... Cry ..she is suffering alot... Cry viren... Angry ..i m really hating him here... Angry ...granny is so kind..loved their convo... Big smile .everything was beautifully written...omg the last part... Big smile ...finally manvi called... [:D/] ...hayye...yeh kahaan ruk dalaa preity...intezaar nahi ho rahaa..plz continue soon..warnaa main sach main pagal ho jaogii.. LOL ..will be eagerly waiting...plz jaldi ho sake toh.. Embarrassed ...thank u so much for the upcoming pm.. Smile
Thanks Yamin... Embarrassed  Your comment was really good..
abb dekh I am updating the next one
stay tuned Wink  

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
will update tomorrow guys as I have to reply on many comments Smile

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