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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 40)

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yaminnthida

This is so awesome preity.. Clap Clap Clap superb update preity... Thumbs Up ...really loved evey bit of it... Star ...bechari manvi... Cry ..she is suffering alot... Cry viren... Angry ..i m really hating him here... Angry ...granny is so kind..loved their convo... Big smile .everything was beautifully written...omg the last part... Big smile ...finally manvi called... [:D/] ...hayye...yeh kahaan ruk dalaa preity...intezaar nahi ho rahaa..plz continue soon..warnaa main sach main pagal ho jaogii.. LOL ..will be eagerly waiting...plz jaldi ho sake toh.. Embarrassed ...thank u so much for the upcoming pm.. Smile
Thanks Yamin... Embarrassed  Your comment was really good..
abb dekh I am updating the next one
stay tuned Wink  

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
will update tomorrow guys as I have to reply on many comments Smile

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
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tu na tu na urghhh kitna wrong time par roka tu ne Unhappy
Get lost ROFL omg finally she called hm yess yess yess
Finally maanvi called hm i m dancing vi.vi.viraat ke aage kiya hoga ab i knw i knw i knw
Abhi if u didn't cnt sn na thn get lost ROFL
Mujhe 2 days mai update chahiye
<font color="#FF00FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Tu apni restlessness ko thoda kam kar LOLLOLLOL   
thoda patience rakkh kuri, sab hoega Wink   

I am updating... Big smile
thanks for praising Embarrassed</font>

Woh toh nh hne wala ROFL
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dairymilk12

kab update karoghi
abhi WinkLOL
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Syed695

Finally u Updated...~! Loved it..Thouhg i hated it reading Viren all abusive...but then at the same time clamed by the relation Maanvi n granny share their relation...Simply Nice...Ohh cant wait for their first meet...thinking what it will b like...Waiting for the next Preity..:)
hmm... The next is coming
thanks for waiting a lot Embarrassed 
I loved ur comment as usual Big smile

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia123sagar

awesome update
loved it
i hate that viren
plz cont soon
everyone hates that viren...    thanks Embarrassed  updating
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha_virman

awesome update
continue soon
loved it
thanks...  Embarrassed  updating Big smile
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shobrakapooor

Viren is just a jerk, a big looser, he doesn't have any feelings for his wife other than - - -  Angry
U never failed to amaze me, with ur perfect writing skills..
This update was just of the world, brillianto-fantasticClap
U seriously stopped at a bad point, continue soon!
Thanks Yaar... Brillianto-fantastic wow thanks for the complement
I am overwhelmed.
The next is coming Embarrassed

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