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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 37)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zaira_virman

Just read both the parts and dear it's an amazing story...luv the concept and yeah u r a fantabulous writer and the u describe each and every scene and character is marvellous...
Hats off to u dear...
Plz update soon and pm me...
Thanks Zaira... Embarrassed 
Happy to know that you liked my writing Big smile
I am overwhelmed by your comment Embarrassed
Will surely PM you Big smile

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazyvirmanians

Preity its damn Good... Its amazing...
Loved each n every description... Whether its about Manvi's graany or Virat's character...
Loveee the morning scene described by u... That cotton seeds n all... It was really magical...
I must say this story is just Perfect Clap
Loveeeddd it...
Damn amazing n now waiting for the next part... Or u can say Virat's entry...
 Once again Preity it was beyond perfection as a writer...
Sana... glad to know that you loved each descriptions, really it encourages me to write more Embarrassed
Really Sinners is a record in my writing career  ROFL
Yep, in my area I saw cotton rain one day, that's really magical Day Dreaming
Virat's entry in the next Wink
Thanks again Big smile

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by ShivRajput

Priety loved it.. Cant wait for Virat's entry.. Loved d way u describe everything... Awesome update... Thumbs Up
<font color="#FF00FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks Shiv Embarrassed In next Virat will enter Wink</font>

Continue soon. Cant wait.. Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShivRajput

Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by ShivRajput

Priety loved it.. Cant wait for Virat's entry.. Loved d way u describe everything... Awesome update... Thumbs Up
<font color="#FF00FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks Shiv Embarrassed In next Virat will enter Wink</font>

Continue soon. Cant wait.. Embarrassed
LOL LOL ROFL... meko continue soon bolna mana hain ROFL
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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Please please update soon!!!

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
sorry for not reading your stories earlier.this is what i'm feeling like to do.


i've read the two parts.they're amazing.always wondered why those upper class s**ts opt for male prostitutes.but if this is how their married life is... i feel real sorry for them.

i know virat's hot n all.but a gigolo?i don't know.i'm super excited for this story now.Big smile

p.s.i promise i'll read your other stories too.coz i know they'll be super great too.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
FINALLY SHE CALLED HIM.

THANK YOU FOR THIS NICE UPDATE IT BECOME WONDERFUL WHEN VIRAT WITH HER.Clap

CONTINUE SOON.

EAGERLY WAITING FOR VIRMAN MEETING

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JESMY143VIRMAN

FINALLY SHE CALLED HIM.

THANK YOU FOR THIS NICE UPDATE IT BECOME WONDERFUL WHEN VIRAT WITH HER.Clap

CONTINUE SOON.

EAGERLY WAITING FOR VIRMAN MEETING
OMG thanks Embarrassed You gave a longgg comment an I dreaming? Day Dreaming
Oh I am sooo happy... Thanks again Embarrassed

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