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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 31)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
resss ROFL
 Unres !! Approve
 OMG OMG OMG !!
U updateddd Hug , m i dreaming or what ??? " Some one plz pinch me " Tongue Tongue Tongue .. and itna late PM kia u ne mjhe Cry Cry OuchDisapprove
Or Itniii centuries k baaadd kOi update krta h kiaaa .. BCHO ko maar diya wait kra kra k CryBig smileTongue  ..
Chal ab Comment PAKROOO Cool
!
AaaH !!
The Starting was mind blowing , scene description was awesome .. Or voo GRANNY and daughter-in-law wali emotional conversation main i was like " AwW , they are soo cute Day Dreaming "
And then Cotton seed ki chotti si story Big smile , kaha ja rha h n kaha ni LOL .. i loved that , was soothy Smile
And i have a strong feeling k ye Viraaat h bosss Wink " A man passed by her. She couldn't see him, but she saw his wrist, there was a cotton seed hugging his wrist-watch " ..
Aaliya and maanvi's convo was also nice and worth-reading .. Embarrassed ..
ENDING Shocked , ye koi line ti ending wali Cry ..

Viren Angry Angry .. that jerk , KAMINA kahin ka , i want him to get out from maanvi's life Angry ..
And i want My Viru Boy now .. Next part me surely entry krwana yrrr .. .
Ab esi ending k baaad Next update jaaaldiii kr denaaa .. nii towww Evil SmileBig smileTongue




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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
wowww... behena, kya update hai!!! loved the last part... couldnt help but sing"nagada, nagada, nagada baza... oyeee"... virman milke plan banake aagar virenka murder kare toh tht would be great rei 'Ustaad'... vi..vi.. viratka serviceka at least demo toh dikha deti!!!...:(... kya yaar!!!... chalo aab jaldi update karo... i wish virenka plane crash ho jaye... aur woh Atlantic mein aaise dube kei kabhi wapas na aaye...                      thanks fr th pm... nd my name is clara...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL Kinz loved your comment, she said,


"hey  i was expecting your update sorry thora late ho gai
preity the window part was superb the cotton seed flew an rited touched boys back and that boy must be viraat LOL i dont no from where that cums form may be because that seed was hugging his wrist watch i am just guessingWink i seriously dont like mr vaderaAngryAngry and i thing manvi frnd is rite about mr vadera having somting with that sameeraAngryAngry... and what a bad timimg to end it yaar "Vi..Vi..Virat? and Yes, Vi..Vi..Virat, only for your service...ub agay continue kub karo ge kina wait karna paray ga atleast metting hi kara daiti"
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
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hawww ...mai itni late ...mummy ;(;(;(

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilaonmoon

wowww... behena, kya update hai!!! loved the last part... couldnt help but sing"nagada, nagada, nagada baza... oyeee"... virman milke plan banake aagar virenka murder kare toh tht would be great rei 'Ustaad'... vi..vi.. viratka serviceka at least demo toh dikha deti!!!...:(... kya yaar!!!... chalo aab jaldi update karo... i wish virenka plane crash ho jaye... aur woh Atlantic mein aaise dube kei kabhi wapas na aaye...                      thanks fr th pm... nd my name is clara...
LOL behna loved and enjoyed your comment a lot Clap
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

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hawww ...mai itni late ...mummy ;(;(;(
mummy ki tummy me dard unko mat bula TongueWinkLOL
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Yeh kidhar rok diya tune datewaROFLWasai awesome updatewa..ty for the pmROFL

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Choco.Swiss

Yeh kidhar rok diya tune datewaROFLWasai awesome updatewa..ty for the pmROFL
tujhe bahut miss kar rahi thi re jaanu my date ROFL, toh PM kar dia ROFL

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