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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 28)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
This is so awesome preity.. Clap Clap Clap superb update preity... Thumbs Up ...really loved evey bit of it... Star ...bechari manvi... Cry ..she is suffering alot... Cry viren... Angry ..i m really hating him here... Angry ...granny is so kind..loved their convo... Big smile .everything was beautifully written...omg the last part... Big smile ...finally manvi called... [:D/] ...hayye...yeh kahaan ruk dalaa preity...intezaar nahi ho rahaa..plz continue soon..warnaa main sach main pagal ho jaogii.. LOL ..will be eagerly waiting...plz jaldi ho sake toh.. Embarrassed ...thank u so much for the upcoming pm.. Smile

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged
kab update karoghi

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Finally u Updated...~! Loved it..Thouhg i hated it reading Viren all abusive...but then at the same time clamed by the relation Maanvi n granny share their relation...Simply Nice...Ohh cant wait for their first meet...thinking what it will b like...Waiting for the next Preity..:)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
i hate that viren
plz cont soon

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged
awesome update
continue soon
loved it

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Viren is just a jerk, a big looser, he doesn't have any feelings for his wife other than - - -  Angry
U never failed to amaze me, with ur perfect writing skills..
This update was just of the world, brillianto-fantasticClap
U seriously stopped at a bad point, continue soon!

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kateyes Senior Member
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
wonderful update n beautifully written StarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarmaanvi is going through so much  n viren i wants 2 kill him how mean he is behaving with her so rudely like she is a tissue paper use n throw AngryAngryAngry. maanvi n granny convo was gud atleast sumone is dere 2 console her n i think maanvi had missed 2chances 2 see virat i don't y but i think d boy she see with a grl in party n park was virat n finally next update will b virman convo

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Manvi called Virat... yipee!!
I really hate Viren!!!

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