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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 25)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

Comment coming soon LOL

Edit:- First one to 'res' LOL and last one to unres LOL..

Okey so 18+ story Geek!! Yeh janke hi dil garden garden ho gaya ROFL..

Interesting concept Preity Thumbs Up.. And very well written ClapClapClap.. Update was mind-blowing StarStar.. Beginning was just great.. I hated Manvi's husband for treating her like a tissue paper.. Insensitive moron AngryAngry. reallyShocked and you are zimmedar for it WinkLOL. I already knew that it was not Virat..yep yep you are uthaofying fayda of friendship
ROFL You know how Wink.. But really loved that twist Big smile.. Manvi is Viren's wife..Thank you thank you Embarrassed He is such a cheap flirt AngryAngry.. You really made me hate Viren in this story.. So Aaliya is Manvi's friend and also Mr. 'Pervert' Mittal's wife wow you gave the exact name Clap but many are till don't know whose wife is Aaliya D'oh.. Jaisa Viren waisa hi uska boss AngryAngry .. Really loved the convo between Manvi & Aaliya ClapClap.. Loved Manvi's thoughts when she was watching that couple in the party.. And then came the real shocker Virat Roy The surname is just great, Tom Cruise's name in Night and Day Embarrassed me my self praising my story D'oh comedy of decade ROFL - "the best Gigolo of the town'' Shocked .. Now waiting for his grand entry Wink..  Really eager to read the next part.. So please continue soon LOL.. Thanks a lot for dedicating this to me.. You are a great friend and awesome writer Big smile yes I am LOL.. Love you a lot Huglove you three Hug.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care Preity HugHeart *Tor favourite formal lines* LOLAabar formal lines Angry Hug
Read the bold Embarrassed


Edited by preity_d - 19 April 2013 at 1:25am

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kulsum_virman

mein bhi res Tongue
unresBig smile



preetooo kya interesting thought hai just amazing ...Clap
tu to genius hai yaar...Big smile

viren Angry
kitna kamina hai first time i hate him ...
heartless crteature mein hoti na wahan uska murder kar deti ...
i knw kuch ziada hi overreact karrahi hun LOL

bechari manvi bt i dnt want her to be all tht bechari 
i want her to fight bke...

and virat ka naam sunke hi itni khushi aur excitment ho rahi hai to uski entry pe pata nai kya hogaWink
am sure uska character sabse ziada intersting hoga Big smile
all excited for their meeting ...Wink

par tu pls pls pls plss jaldi update karna ...Smile
res..
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by keertu

first i thought it was virat and the biggest shock is viren.
nice start mummy.Wink
waiting for virat's entry.
and plz  continue soon don't take much timeAngry
Beta next update ka waqt ho gaya hain WinkLOL
thanks... Embarrassed beta mummy pe gussa nai karte TongueLOLLOL
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by kulsum_virman

mein bhi res Tongue
unresBig smile



preetooo kya interesting thought hai just amazing ...Clap
tu to genius hai yaar...Big smile

viren Angry
kitna kamina hai first time i hate him ...
heartless crteature mein hoti na wahan uska murder kar deti ...
i knw kuch ziada hi overreact karrahi hun LOL

bechari manvi bt i dnt want her to be all tht bechari 
i want her to fight bke...

and virat ka naam sunke hi itni khushi aur excitment ho rahi hai to uski entry pe pata nai kya hogaWink
am sure uska character sabse ziada intersting hoga Big smile
all excited for their meeting ...Wink

par tu pls pls pls plss jaldi update karna ...Smile
res..

oye wat ress haaan 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Iss thread pe res karna mana hai LOLLOL

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shobrakapooor

acha mein bhi resLOL
-UNRESED-
 
Ur update just went with  the title...Clap Thanks Embarrassed
Ur stories are always perfect and unique...awee thank you so muchBig smile
And have to say , the update was HOT...Winkthanks Tongue
u brilliantly portrayed the character of Manvi who is just insecure towards her evasive husband!
Her dilemma perfectly written... thanks I am glad you liked my writingEmbarrassed
And Virat's introShockedShocked stay tuned fo rthe next Wink
Continue soon
 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by keertu

first i thought it was virat and the biggest shock is viren.
nice start mummy.Wink
waiting for virat's entry.
and plz  continue soon don't take much timeAngry
Beta next update ka waqt ho gaya hain WinkLOL
thanks... Embarrassed beta mummy pe gussa nai karte TongueLOLLOL
LOL
BUT MUMMY IS NOT FULFILLING HER CHILD'S WISHESLOLTongue

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yaminnthida

Awesome concept preity...ClapClapClap...really loved it...Star...damekedaar update...ClapClapthe way u described everything was amazing preity...Star..i  was like shock at first preity...mujhe lagaa woh virat tha par nikaa viren...bechaari manvi...Cry...really feel bad for her...omg viren is cruel n disgusting...Angry...i really loved the concept preity...ab manvi jalde se phone kare...WinkEmbarrassed...eeks...really excited to read next part...will be eagerly waiting...plz continue soon naa...Embarrassed...thank u so much for the upcoming pm...Smile
res Tongue

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