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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 24)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virumanu

y didt u pm me ur story ..plz pm me too plz
I didn't PM you Confused don't know Confused

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthi13

preeto!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Big smile
kya story hai re...
i love it!!!!
pehele mujhe laga manvi's husband is virat...
nd kya romance hai..Blushing
oh no manvi ka husband viren hai..
teri wajah se i hate viren nwCry
nd dat viren's boseAngry
haww kya shock diya.. Shocked virat gigoloShocked
wondeful strt preeto!!!!!!Clap
tere saare stories itne awesome hai yarr...
luv u so much fr writing such wonderful stories!!!!1
cont soon nd thnx fr da pm
LOLLOL hate Viren and love Tacker simple Wink 
rthanks yaar, Embarrassed mere sarre stories awesome? awee love you muahh
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Angryare u going to Update Or not ??? bcoz m already in love with ur story WinkClap
i was drinking water but when  Shocker Of the Day Samne aya tow I splited water immediately .. LOL
i was like wait let me read one more time , but woaaahh !! that *** was Viren ConfusedShockedShocked
viren is maaanvi's husband ?? wow man i mean its some thing i really have to appreciate that bcox jis type ka intro diya ta maanvi k husband ka i already started hating that Character k VIRAT esa kese yrr .. but thank god Viren taBig smileBig smileBig smile..
but 2nd shock came when i red " Virat Roy , The gigolo Boy " ShockedShocked .. seriously .. kuch ni bht different h Big smileBig smile ..
hey .. wese r u ok ?? ni i mean feeling weeling , tabyat thk h na ?? Unhappy .. no update yr , just 1 hi part update kr k chordiya .. Shocked not fair .. Ouch
next time do PM me Smile ..
LOL LOL
le teri intezar khatam hui  LOL
Thanks,Embarrassed Big smile  I loved your comment Embarrassed keep commenting like that WinkLOL
n I am in love with your comments Wink LOL

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nanditam2107

Hi...read this first update of yours loved the starting...!!!
First i thought its virat...& i started hated him already!!!! But then thank god...it was viren!!!
Ok now virat is a GIGOLO!!!! This is interesting now!!!

Looking forward for next update...do update soon & send me PM also Smile
hey will surely PM you
thanks Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amgud

wow another story yayyy n as usual its also really really different n hot toooBlushing all ur stories r completely different n have out of the world concepts but one thing is common n thats virats different professionsLOL
as in ointmnt he is a painter, in BR he is a superstar muscian, in awara sapne he is a photographer but the profession he have in this story is jst no words to say...but in a good way hanWink n now w8ing for his entry desperately 
but u made viren such a jerkCry i also love manvir...well but not more than VIRMANEmbarrassed no w8ing for the story to unfold n their journey to reveal which will defo be out of the world
i have one questionQuestion in the update u said that manvi has everything a girl can wish for like a handsome husband enormous house n all u also mention she has loving in-laws means virens family so dont they know how he is treating her like a tissue papperConfused
  I JUST LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATEHeart
N plzzz cont soon asap
OMG that much long comment wow loved it Heart Embarrassed
you really noticed in my every story Virat have different professions wow Clap
but one correction, in AS he is not photographer, he is a cameraman, in rang milanti he is a photographer Tongue
yes, I too love manvir...  Day Dreaming isiliye mannu ko viren ki biwi bana dia LOL
and about the family will know in the next update and the next one is coming
WinkEmbarrassedLOL


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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virman223

Amazing yaar very nice concept just hate viren for treating her like that hope she can get the love from virat which she is deprived of and pls cont soon
thanks...hmm we too think the same
read the next one Wink

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha_virman

awesome 
continue soon
thanks
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artii159

Hey Preity, sorry m late, but dis update was awesome yaar...Luvd it..as always...Very interesting, so Maanvi is married to Viren Vadhera, a meany...hawww,,,he is so rude n mean, poor Maanvi, I really don't lyk dis Viren, jaldi se Jeevika ko bulao yaar..LOLTongue...wat kind of frndz does he hve, ishh,,,disgusting,,,felt bad 4 Maanvi...Aaliya seemed nyc n sweet frn of Maanvi...da card she gave 2 Mannu, was hmm...LOL...ok so she kept it wid her...n dat person is none other den Viraat...oh sorry Viraat Roy...Haye,,,wat will happen nxt, plz plz plz update soon Preity..thnks a lot 4 da update n 4 da pm...continue soon n do pm me...thnk u..Smile
Thanks...but there is no jeevika for viren Wink manvi one is enough for him Wink  LOL
Thanks yaar and updating, stay tuned Wink
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