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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 18)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Very god nice story dear

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nice concept. continue soon.
plzzz PM me when u update
 

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
ufff preity ye kya likh dia tune...!!!!
main toh teri fan ho gai PHIR SE...!!!! Clap Clap 
 
i really loved it on the whole...!!!! Heart Heart
 
curtain raiser chapter was JUST BANG ON...!!!! Star 
 
first when i began reading i thought what has happened to my viru boy n why isnt he behaving like this with manvi... i already began hating him for being so heartless and harsh n cruel... i really wasnt liking his behaviour and actions and then came the SHOCKER " MRS. MANVI VIREN VADERA " Shocked
then i was like... D'ohits viren...!!! n for the first tym ever i hated viren... all bcos of u... Angry u made me hate viren preetz... chal koi nahi, its okk... Wink and then another shock was on my way, which i was unaware of GIGOLO VIRAT ROY...!!!! Shocked Shocked
 
haaye...!!!  i have alreday started imagining the story in this poor inno brain of mine... Wink ROFL
 
thank u for such a piece of writing n for the pm...!!!! Hug

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res!!!
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nice story dear

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Haye prez tune viren ko kesa bna dala ..me shocked Shocked
I feel poor for manvi..:(
But viren please use thoda better bna de  apni story me 
Update was good!
cONtinue !

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
HEYYY NYC...
waiting to read more...heyy really so nyc first i got shock bt dn it ws viren...
n virat d gigolo boy...awesum preity waiting to read more...!!!! Embarrassed

Edited by sweetmanu - 10 April 2013 at 4:43am

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lovelyyy upd
cont.soon

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