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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 14)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

wah !!!!!!
kya starting hai yr ...
first para me he 18+ dal diya ...
coming to the update it was superb ...
the way u described manvi's pain was just too awesome ...
bechari manvi facing so much in her life ...
now waiting for our hero's entry .
beautifully written fruity ...
waiting for the next part eagerly...update soon .
love you ...muaaahhh
haan 1st para me hi daal dia WinkTongueROFL 
Hmmm, Manvi's hero's profession is quite unique na? so that's why manvi has to suffer TongueOuchROFL
Thank You Embarrassed
Next Update pe bhi comment karna, res nahi
Silly ROFL

Edited by preity_d - 08 April 2013 at 11:58pm

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

chal ja bye ,tjhe to bad me dkhungi.




all the best (this is my third time that m wishing u ).

love you
tune meko daanta na to phir dekheoCryROFLROFL

thanku ab paka wala bubeeConfused

love u both n mistROFLROFL

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashishi

Originally posted by __Aarti__

tu mera Mazaak udaing barfi ????
hawwwShockednahi toShockedhawwwShockedmene to teko chuma diaEmbarrassed


awww ...
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by __Aarti__

wah !!!!!!
kya starting hai yr ...
first para me he 18+ dal diya ...
coming to the update it was superb ...
the way u described manvi's pain was just too awesome ...
bechari manvi facing so much in her life ...
now waiting for our hero's entry .
beautifully written fruity ...
waiting for the next part eagerly...update soon .
love you ...muaaahhh
haan 1st para me hi daal dia WinkTongueROFL 
Hmmm, Manvi's hero's profession is quite unique na? so that's why manvi has to suffer TongueOuchROFL
Thank You Embarrassed
Next Update pe bhi comment karna, res nahi
Silly ROFL
Next Update pe bhi comment karna, res nahi Silly ROFLsec uROFLROFL

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by keertu

first i thought it was virat and the biggest shock is viren.
nice start mummy.Wink
waiting for virat's entry.
and plz  continue soon don't take much timeAngry
Beta aise mat bol main dar jaati hun ROFL
Thank You I am glad You likedEmbarrassed
Virat's name already entered now Virat too will make his entry in the next Wink
take Care Big smile

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
han comment karungi pakka

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Awesome concept preity...ClapClapClap...really loved it...Star...damekedaar update...ClapClapthe way u described everything was amazing preity...Star..i  was like shock at first preity...mujhe lagaa woh virat tha par nikaa viren...bechaari manvi...Cry...really feel bad for her...omg viren is cruel n disgusting...Angry...i really loved the concept preity...ab manvi jalde se phone kare...WinkEmbarrassed...eeks...really excited to read next part...will be eagerly waiting...plz continue soon naa...Embarrassed...thank u so much for the upcoming pm...Smile

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

han comment karungi pakka
EmbarrassedBig smileHug

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