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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 114)

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
First of all a big hug to you for continuing this story! Hug
Awesome update Preity! Thumbs Up Really it was just amazing.. Especially the ending.. I could actually feel Manvi's pain and disappointment and Virat's helplessness.. Very well portrayed ClapClap.. He told her the truth because he didn't want her to think low of him and I think he was kind of desperate to make her understand.. Manvi had so much faith in him.. Superb Big smile.. But this Navika sounds quite evil to me Ermm.. She wants him for ever?? Huh dream on, evil woman Silly.. Loved how Virat saved Manvi from that Mittal.. Such a pervert Censored.. I hope one day Manvi will slap him and tell him off.. Eager to know what's gonna happen next ;).. Please continue SOON!! Tongue Take care SmileLOL

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

falling for love guru yeh kya? Wacko  Confused  yep I love saruv as a jodi, I started a ff on them too ROFL aur bata tera name shobra hain ya kuch aur? Shocked 


Omg what did I write?? Lol I mixed u with one of my other fav writer lol sorry :P 

No shobra is just my forum name.. real name is Navya :)

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shobrakapooor

Originally posted by preity_d

falling for love guru yeh kya? Wacko  Confused  yep I love saruv as a jodi, I started a ff on them too ROFL aur bata tera name shobra hain ya kuch aur? Shocked 


Omg what did I write?? Lol I mixed u with one of my other fav writer lol sorry :P 

No shobra is just my forum name.. real name is Navya :)
navya Hug waise wo T-Series video me kya hain aur kaun hain? plz elaborate, the video is fascinating Embarrassed
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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Awesome Come back.>!!! 
Maanvi back in her life..and the worse or say pathetic she been tortured by Viren high class people..And the peace that she found from 1 person has again been occupied in saving money...So theres Twist coming up...intersting cz while readin i thought Navika is the twist as she will seperate VirMan..but theres more...Waiting on how will this complicate their complicated lives...Thanks for Updating Preity!!!

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
nice update..
continue soon pleasee

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Posted: 21 December 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
good one Smile pm me when u update next

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Posted: 22 December 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
unres at pg 112

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Posted: 22 December 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by shobrakapooor

Originally posted by preity_d

falling for love guru yeh kya? Wacko  Confused  yep I love saruv as a jodi, I started a ff on them too ROFL aur bata tera name shobra hain ya kuch aur? Shocked 


Omg what did I write?? Lol I mixed u with one of my other fav writer lol sorry :P 

No shobra is just my forum name.. real name is Navya :)
navya Hug waise wo T-Series video me kya hain aur kaun hain? plz elaborate, the video is fascinating Embarrassed


T-series?? When did I join that?? Yaa for ur kind info t-series mein amir aur katrina hai. . For the song malangLOL

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