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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 109)

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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
update plz

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Posted: 06 November 2013 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Sorry 4 late comment actually i lost dis story but finally found it sorry again
Part 6 : Amazing update it was awsum StarStarStarStarStarStarStar , maanvi asked granny's permission 2 let her go out n praying dat she will refuse her but granny do against her pray n had doubt dat something is going on in maanvi's life but still granny didn't ask her anything until she feel comfortable dat was really sweet of her she luvs n trust maanvi alot , virmaan day out was nice simple n beautiful luved dat line ( d first tym i saw dose eyes , i got it dat dey will be my destruction ) virat was lost in her his simple n thoughtful gestures like he noticed her misplaced bindi , dat she is more talkative , offered her water, wiped her tears dat was superb ClapClapClapClapClap n maanvi was so happy, carefree n full of life when she is with virat Big smileBig smileBig smile after so many days she enjoyed her day with him , luved d way u portrayed her dilemma whether 2 trust him or not ClapClapClapClap but at d end of day she trusted him n somewhere she has some expectations 4rm him she was disappointed when he refused 2 travel by d same auto ( he might play a good role in escaping maanvi 4rm her evil husband trap) she is confused about d whole thing but still she is ready to experience a new world with him n tista is an interesting character virat shares a deep bond with her n i m sure wht he is doing is just 4 her health want 2 read virat pov
Part 7 : Superb update luved it Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up virman
r opening up 2 each other dey were enjoying each other's company luved d way dere relationship is developing Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile , finally maanvi is doing everything which makes her happy living her life 2 d fullest just bcoz of virat presence n on other side virat is loosing interest in his job seems kind of distracted n confused also luved dere convo n falling scene ClapClapClapClapClapClap , aaliya was very rude 2 maanvi bcoz of her virat is not giving attention 2 her n sameera seems fishy hopes she was not spying on dem or she is spying 4 granny  dats y granny was in fear when maanvi left house n viren is back hopes he will not findout soon about virman otherwise he will make her life hell
Sorry again 4 late comment

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Waiting for Update preity..!!

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Kya tu seriously update degi preetz...???

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waiting for your update...
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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Preetz tu online h toh plz mujhe bta de will u ever update sinners...???

U know i luv it...

Ryt now also i m re- reading it...

Plsss updateee... Plzzz
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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
thoda waqt chahiye... will update for sure... all files related to sinners got lost when my pc went ill so have to rewrite and having those emotions which were then in me is tough but I am trying Big smile thanks guys for still remembering my work 
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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

thoda waqt chahiye... will update for sure... all files related to sinners got lost when my pc went ill so have to rewrite and having those emotions which were then in me is tough but I am trying Big smile thanks guys for still remembering my work


Haaye re meri kismat... Dead
Y god...??? Y...??? Cry Cry

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