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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 107)

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Preity amazing update!!! MSN Onion Emoticons After a looonggg time LOL.. Loved every bit of it Monkey Emoticons.. Virat and Manvi both are opening up to each other.. They are enjoying each other's company.. Loved the way their relationship is developing Big smile.. Manvi is doing everything which makes her happy.. She is living life to the fullest Big smile.. And here Virat is loosing interest in his job.. He seems kind of distracted and confused also MSN Onion Icon.. I loved their conversation Big smile.. "I know you love rain, and believe me one day you will feel them on your own terrace, in our own garden. I will make it happen. But till then' take care of yourself. You have to be strong now."She nodded. How easily he make her understands things, as if she was a small girl."But why will you do all these for me?" she asked innocently."Because I care for you." He replied."Why do you care for me?" she asked again."Because I love to care for you." He replied back."Answer is not acceptable." She smiled."But that's the truth" he said in determination."-  My favourite part in the update HeartHeartHeartHeart.. Fantastic lines!!ClapClap   And not to forget the fall! Loved it Tongue.. Real life experience Wink.. Not bad!! LOL Aww Virat kissed her forehead Day Dreaming.. Awesome!! Big smile  Aaliya was very rude Stern Smile.. Didn't like the way she talked to Manvi.. And that nurse also sounds fishy Ermm.. OMG Viren is back!!!! Monkey Emoticon Itni jaldi!! Ouch Why???? Unhappy It means no more Virman outing Onion Icons.. Eager to know what's gonna happen next.. Update was superb!!! StarStarClapClap  Please continue soon.. Take care Hug


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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Woow! That was just a beautiful update...
Happy that Manvi is finally enjoying her life..
Virat's such a great person.. loved their cute scenes with each other!!
I just hope Aaliya dont create a mess cz Viren the dog's also here :(

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Loveddd it! Please continue soon! :)
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Posted: 31 July 2013 at 7:06am | IP Logged
OYEE Chaldi Update Kar

Warna Meri Chapal Tera Behja
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Posted: 31 July 2013 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madii786

OYEE Chaldi Update Kar

Warna Meri Chapal Tera Behja
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Posted: 31 July 2013 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Updateee _________? When

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I already half done with the update but the next is with some research work ... so I should have enough time to write that, which I am not getting, hopefully will update very very soon ...  Stay tuned the willing readers ... Embarrassed

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U never pm any readers? If no thn that's really bad of u! Hope u get time n update soon

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