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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 100)

Aenna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
I hate u preetooo for making us wait for soo longgg...
Nd i will not talk to u!!!!
Nd its not for u its about update nd d update was awwwsum...
Hayeee manvi his destruction... <3
lolz i lyk dat munna hahahh...
Who is dis tista??? Behen honi chahiye..i dont want her to be his wife lolzz no hell no!!!
Plzzz update asap nd till then m not gona talk to u!!

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Faria12345 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Who is that tista???? His GF or sister? Is she suffering from any disease? Virat is working for her treatment??
The day out was nice n simple .. I like the auto driver .. Sensing he might play a good role in escaping Manvi from
Viren's trap? Oh speaking of viren hope he don't return back n get to know about her,.. Or else she is dead... Second day with virat ahem his money will
Be wasted hah.. I wanna know more about virat's povzzx how he feels n all... Wanna know the secret behind his life... Nice update hope to see more b this time plz don't take ages

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jia123sagar IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
awesome update
plz cont soon

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
nice update day out is good auto part also nice
but who is tista update soon nxt part

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
The update was just mindblowing
lovely virman moments
nd glad that he atleast did some spending lol warna hamesha stinchy hi rahenga... :p

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HalkatJawaani Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Omg. prietyy Noo Need To Thank Me Im Your Friend!

Thank You Soo much For Metioning Me!

I Loved The Update!

Nothing makes Me Smile More Than You Updates

I Loved The Virman Scene They Are Soo Cute Toghether!

Aww He Wanted To meet Her Again!

Ahahaha He Spended 2,000 Rupees (Barbadi Shru) lol

Aurr Yeh Tista Kaun Hai???

I Was Not First To Comment -__- Chal Next Time Try Karogi

Thanks For A Amazing Update! I Loved It And U!

Love Madhiya xxx

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome n Welcome Back..!!!! Maanvi has started opening up..though not competly but n little things...N Virat is attracted to her...yes he is...he has seen her before n now wants to spend time...this would break the shell and bring back the real Maanvi to life...n Virat also isn't alone he also carries a baggage..ths is interesting..Eager for next Preity..!!!

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daydreamer9 Goldie
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged
"tomar chokhe dekhechhilam amar shorbonash..."bangla do sounds 10000 times better than english.

sorry for that off topic comment.i love the slow pace of this story.loved manvi's dillema over virat's intention.how she ended up trusting him despite not wanting to trust him.loved the tinge of disappointment  she felt when virat refused to travel by the same auto one more time.infact loved the whole thing.thank u for updating.Heart
n congrats on  completing 100 pages.

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