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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jhanvi_TaaRey

plz update soon :D

waiting since long timeBig smileBig smile

will update it today pakkaBig smile
working on itSmile

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged

Hey guyssBig smileBig smile

I'm finally here with an update...Big smileBig smile

Sorry late hua uske liye as college ke kaam se fursat hi nahi mil rahiOuch

But still took out time for all those who were waiting eagerly for the update..

Chalo now start readingSmile



Part 18

(Rey is at his place very angry or disturbed or may be confused to be angry or no.)

Rey: I never expected ki Niki mujhse ye baat chupayegi! How could she! Aur Taani, voh bhi uss Shivam ki side le rahi hai! I didn't expect this from you.Angry

*At Sharon's place*

Sharon: Niki, whats the matter? Tum aur Rey itna weird kyun behave kar rahe the?Confused

Niki: Di please leave it na..

Sharon: You have to tell me!

Niki: Yansh ko pata chal gaya ki I'm in a relationship..

Sharon: Ohh...wait a sec WHAT!!!Shocked

Niki: Hmm...

Sharon (composing herself): Rey ko itna gussa kyun aa raha hai?? I mean even he is in a relationship...then why is he over-reacting...

Niki (cutting her): As I'm in a relationship with Shivam!

Sharon: Do you even know what you are saying!!!ShockedAngry

Niki: I know very well di...

(Niki tells Sharon about how she met Shivam and how she fell in love with him.)

Sharon: So Shivam has really changed...That's good!!Embarrassed

*At TaaYam's place*

Swayam: Taani kahan thi tum? Itni der laga di..

Taani: College mein kuch kaam tha bhai..Pinch

Swayam: Taani jhooth kyun bol rahi ho??

Taani: Vo bhai (and tells him what all happened between NikAnsh) isliye thodi pareshaan thi...Rey Niki se naraz reh kar khud bhi bohot dukhi hai..

Swayam: But Rey is right...Shivam pe firse trust nahi kar sakte..

Taani: Bhai abhi Shivam ko chodo...pehle Rey ko kuch bhi karne se rokna hoga. Vo bohot gusse mein the..

Swayam: Chalo chalte hai..

(Taayam, Sharon and Niki leave to meet Rey. When they reach his house, they become tensed as the door was left open, which Rey never does. They become tensed and rush into the house. On reaching Rey's room, they were shocked.ShockedShockedShocked

The lights in his room were turned off. The room was a complete mess. All things were lying on the floor. The mirror was shattered. Rey was aggressively punching the punch bag and his fingers were bleeding.)

Taani (immediately rushing into the room): Rey aap yeh kya kar rahe ho! Apne aap ko chot kyun pahucha rahe ho (starts cryingCry)

Rey: Taani tum yahan?? Mujhe laga tum Shivam ke saath hogi!!

Niki: Yansh tum mujhse naraz ho na toh mujhe daato but please baki sab se aise rudely baat mat karo!!

Sharon: Par Rey tum Niki se bhi naraz kyun ho...I mean I know that she likes Shivam..but itna gussa??

Rey: You are ok with the fact that she and Shivam are a couple??

Sharon: Yes!!

ReYam: Have you lost it!!ShockedAngry

Taani: Bhai, Rey, aap dono ek baar humari baat sunn toh lo..

Rey: Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunana hai..guys please leave..I want to be alone..Angry

(Swayam takes them out of the room)

Swayam: Tum teeno neeche ruko...Rey ka gussa jab thanda ho jayega tabi upar aa jana..(and again goes into his room)

Rey: Swayam agar tum bhi mujhe 'Shivam badal gaya hai' yeh samjhane aaye ho toh please..I'm not interested in listening..

Swayam: No rey. Infact mein toh tumhe batane aaya hu ki tu bilkul sahi kar rahe ho.

Rey: Matlab??Confused

Swayam: Matlab yeh ki..tu Shivam ko hate karta hai..for obvious reasons..then tu Taani and Sharon pe gussa hai as they trust Shivam...yeh hi nahi tu apni darling sis se itna naraz hai ki uski baat ek baar sunane ke liye bhi ready nahi hai...bohot sahi kar raha hai tu!!!

Rey: Aur kya sunane hai..Ouch

Swayam: Rey pehle tu baith yaha pe..

Rey: Ab bol...

Swayam: I know tu Shivam ki wajah se upset hai...but atleast Niki ko ek baar apna POV batane toh de..

Rey: Vo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahati..isiliye Sharon ke ghar chali gayi..Disapprove

Swayam: Vo chahati hai ki tum usse apni baat samjhane ka ek mauka do..

(Saying this Swayam left his room. After a while Niki entered. Taani and SwaRon were near the door.)

Niki: Yansh...

Rey: Come in Nik!!

Niki: Why did you hurt urself?? Galati meine ki thi na toh mujhe daato, mujhe maaro, but please don't hurt yourself..CryCry

Rey: Nik...stop crying...I promise ki aage kabhi bhi aise nahi karunga..aur haan galati tumhari nahi meri thi..

Niki: Tumhari kaise??

Rey: Vo isliye ki...tum humesha apne friends soch samajh ke banati ho..so Shivam ko bhi jaanane ke baad friend banaya hoga..but meine yeh sab bina soche over react kar diya..

Niki: No Yansh, you were right bas ek baar meri puri baat sunn lete toh yeh sab nahi hota..

Rey: SorryDisapprove...ab batao...

Niki: Ek saal pehle Shivam ne London University join ki thi...he was always very lonely..kabhi kisise baat nahi kuch nahi...then one day we friends were playing Truth or Dare...tabhi I got a dare to go and talk to him...when I went and spoke with him I realized ki he hates himself and wants to change but usse ho nahi paa raha tha...friendship ki kami...so I started talking to him. One day all of a sudden he came and told me to stay away from him else that won't be good for me...something inside me told me not to go away..then later I forced him to speak about his past..he agreed and told me everything that he did here but never told me the names of you people. After hearing all that..I slapped him and didn't even look at him...but andar ek darr rehta tha..what if voh badla le..but he didn't...so finally I asked him if he really wanted to change..he said yes..and then slowly he came out of his bad phase..aur pata nahi kab but we both started having feelings for each other...later he confessed and we came in a relationship...

Rey: After listening to you, I can say that you have really changed him...but still..

Niki: I know..tumhe yeh darr hai ki agar purana Shivam jaag gaya toh..don't worry Yansh..agar aisa hua toh sabse pehle mein usse durr chali jaungi..Smile

Rey: Nik I'm really sorry..

Niki: Tumhe mujhse nahi but kisi aur se maafi maangani chahiye..

Rey: Kisi aur...Shivam??Confused

Niki: No re...Taani se..tum faltu ka uss par chillaye...Taani please come in.Smile

(Taani came in. She had tears in her eyes.)

Niki: I'll leave you two alone..but haan jaldi neeche aa jana for dinnerWink..I'm sure no one has had dinner..(she leaves)

Rey: Taani tum ro kyun rahi ho?? I'm really sorry for shouting at you in college..I didn't mean to hurt you..Disapprove

Taani: Mein jaanti hu Rey...aap bas pareshaan the..aur please sorry mat boliye..mein aapse bilkul bhi naraz nahi huEmbarrassed..actually hu..Angry

Rey: Huh??Confused

Taani: Yeh aapne room ki halath bana ke rakh di hai..aur aapke haath..aapko kya lagta hai aapka khoon sasta hai ki aap usse itna bahate ho..aap na apna khayal kabhi nahi rakhte..

Rey: Meri Jodhpur Express..saans toh lo..LOL

Taani: Rey mein mazak nahi kar rahi..

Rey: I know Taani...but now no more of this sadness..abhi sirf aur sirf happiness hogi..kal semis then finals..I promise you Taani NDC ki trophy St. Louis hi jeetega for their GS!!Big smile

Taani: Rey neeche chaliye..warna Niki upar aa jayegi..LOL

(All of them have dinner. Everyone goes to their respective homes and sleep peacefully)


PhewD'oh done with the update..

My poor fingers hurting a lotOuch

Now you all give some stress to your fingers and comment warna mein update nahi karungiWinkLOL

Coming to a serious note please answer this:

I'm really confused how to move further with the story..I have two ideas, actually its just one but two..jyada zor mata dalo dimaag pe..continue readingLOL

1. To take a huge leap and show everyone settled and marriage.

or

2. To show how they pursue their career and a small twist (not actually a twist, but a trust test).

please do answerSmile



Edited by sashaz_sis - 17 April 2014 at 5:01am

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Awesome i go with the first concept

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
awsm prt 
n emotional too 
i luv shivam stry 
n i will go with 2 
option thanks for PM 

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Heyy didnt noe about this ss but by the comments i read sounds interesting and will definetely read it tysm 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved it
Please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged

Omg Rey is such an aggressive young man lol

Aww i love how Swayam make him understand the entire situation and he actually listen to what Niki has to say. There conversation was so sweet... taarey scene was too cute. Fab update, I love it

I like option 2 and then one, the trust thing is an awesome idea and then I love the settling and marriage part.

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
very nice update. finally rey shivam ke liye maan gaya. maanta kaise nahi aakhir ek bhai ne doosre ko samjhaya. swayam is experienced manLOL
by the way I think 2 wala track is nice

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