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#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (link to thread 2 added) (Page 2)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Its a amezng story..plz plz cntnu soon.egarly waitng 4 nxt part.

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 1:59am | IP Logged

Part 4

*In Rey's car*

(Rey is driving, Niki is sitting besides him and Sharon on the back seat)

Rey: Sharon...vo sube ke liye I'm really sorry...I was really behaving like a jerk...

Sharon: Its ok Rey...I know why you were behaving that way...(looks at Niki)

Rey: Thanks...

Niki: Offooo...ab tum dono kabse formality nibhane lage...'I'm sorry'...'it's ok'...cheee...you guys have changed...

Rey: Tu toh aaj bhi waisi hi hai... (Niki is smiling shylyEmbarrassed)...IRRITATING... (Niki gets angry while ShaRey start laughingLOLLOL)

Niki: YANSH...!!!!!Angry

Rey: OK OK calm down...

*All three reach Rey's house...meanwhile at TaaYam's house*

(The gang has gathered at TaaYam's house)

Vicky: Yeh Rey ka behavior kuch odd nahi laga??Confused

Swayam: Haan aur Sharon bhi itni jaldi kaise maan gayi usse team mein include karne

(There is complete chaos in the room)

Taani (to herself): Rey ne Niki se humare relationship ki baat kyun chupayi...voh hai kaun... (shaking her head) Taani tu kuch jyada hi soch rahi hai...Rey ne kaha na ki aisa kuch nhi hai... (loudly)...but Niki Rey ke ghar kyun rehne gayi hai..?!?!?!?

Nil: Yeh pata lagane ka ek hi raasta hai...Rey ke ghar chalte hai...

(Everyone agrees)

*Niki and ShaRey are busy talking when the door bell rings...Rey opens the door*

Gang: Surprise...!!!

Rey: Guys tum log yahan??

Swayam: Humne socha as VP sir said we should get to know Niki well why not have dinner together...

Rey: Toh pehle bolte...kahin bahar jaane ka plan banate...

Sharon: Rey kaun hai...??

Swayam: Sharon abhi tak yahan...Big smile

Boys: Majnu kahin ka...

(They all go in)

*Taani is walking with Rey behind everyone*

Rey: Taani I know ki tum kya soch rhi ho..but trust me aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..

Taani: Mujhe aap pe trust hai Rey... I trust u...

*Suddenly the light goes...and a loud scream is heard*

Rey: Nik...(runs to the hall and hugs Niki tightly)

Sharon: Niki kuch nhi hua hai hum sab yahi hai...

(All are giving confused looks to the trio)

Rey: Sharon, Nik ko sambhalo mein candles leke aata hun...

 Niki: (tightly hugging Rey) Yanshu mujhe chodke mat jao..(starts weepingCry)

Rey: Shooo... mein kahin nahi ja raha...stop crying...

*Sharon gets few candles and lights them*

Taani(shocked to see the state of Niki goes near her): Niki dekho abh andhera nahi hai

('andhera' word sunte hi Niki burries her head in Rey's chest)

Taani: Niki dekho its not dar..

*Rey looks at Taani and nods his head saying no*

Rey: Nik...dekho candles ki light kitni beautiful lag rahi hai...

Niki: Yanshu mujhe dar lag rha hai..Cry

Rey: Tu toh mera strong baccha hai na...dar kaise lag sakta hai...and mein yahi hun tumhare saath...always forever..

(Rey's eyes showed pain...Taani saw the pain in his eyes)

*Niki broke the hug*

Rey: Nik tum yahi ruko mein fuse check karke aata hun...(tears had started building up in his eyes as he left)

*Taani followed him with a candle in her hand*

(Rey is facing the fuse box and Taani is standing behind him)

Taani: Rey aap theek ho?? (keeps her hand on his shoulder)

*Rey turns and hugs her tightly and starts crying*

 CryCryCry

 

I end this part here

I know thoda boring thaUnhappy...but please tomatoes n eggs na phekna...



Edited by sashaz_sis - 15 April 2014 at 2:55am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
wow yaar!!!
taani bohot understanding hai!!!
loved the episode!!!
pls update soon!!!

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Wow.amezng update nxt part soon.thanx 4 pm.

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 4:30am | IP Logged
aww...awesome update...
loved it =D
update soon =)

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged

Part 5

 

(Rey is facing the fuse box and Taani is standing behind him)

Taani: Rey aap theek ho?? (Keeps her hand on his shoulder)

*Rey turns and hugs her tightly and starts crying*Cry

Taani (confused): Rey aap ro kyun rahe ho??

Rey: Sab meri galati hai...yeh sab meri vajah se hua hai...it's all my fault...Cry

Taani: Yeh aap kya bol rahe ho..?? Aapki galati??

Rey: 10 saal pehle...jab hum Delhi mein rehte the...tab dad ko kisi meeting ke liye Mumbai aana tha...meine dad ko force kiya ki hum teeno [Nik Sharon and Rey] bhi saath challenge..toh hum ek vacation ke liye Mumbai aa gaye...

*FLASHBACK*

(In Oberoi hotel)

Rey: Dad you promised...abhi hum kuch nhi sunna chahate...

Dad: Haan beta I know that I had promised you but really not today...

Rey: No hum aaj hi chowpaty [beach] pe jayenge...no excuses...

Sharon: Ya uncle please hume aaj hi jaana hai...please...

Rey Nik Sharon: PLEASE...!!!

Dad: Ok fine theek hai...aaj sham ko hum sab jayenge...ab mein apni meeting ke liye jau.??

Rey: Haan jayiye na... humne kab mana kiya...TongueLOL

Dad: Naughty boy...

*All three are very happyDancing...finally they'll get to enjoy on the beach*

(Rey's mom enters)

Mom: Ok kids go and rest for sometime...aaj sham ko jana hai na...chalo ab atche bachon ki tarah so jao..

*In the evening at chowpaty*

Rey: Chalo paani mein jate hai...maza ayega..

Sharon: No Rey...paani mein nahi...chalo sand castle banate hai...

Niki: Aur pani bhi kitna ganda hai...

Rey: Seedhe seedhe kyun nahi bolti ki tum dono dar gayi...

Niki: Hum kisi se nahi darte...samjhe tum...

Rey: GIRLS..!!!

Niki:Shocked Kya matlab hai tumhara...chalo di abhi isse batate hai ki hume darr nahi lagta...

*Both of them go in the water and start playing...Rey was smiling as he was successful in getting them in the water*

(After enjoying Rey and Sharon come out of water...but Niki is still playing...suddenly a huge wave comes and the impact is such that Niki gets pulled into the sea...she starts screaming...hearing her scream dad rushes into the water and brings her out...she was unconscious as water had entered in her nose and mouth...they take her to the hospital..after some time she is fine and all go and meet her...but after this incident she is always scared of darkness...she fears of loosing everyone in the dark)  

Rey: Niki ki iss halat ke liye mein hi responsible hoon...na mein force karta aur na ye sab hota...its all because of me...CryCry

Taani: Nahi Rey yeh aap kya bol rahe ho...isme aapki koi galati nahi hai...jo hua so hua..abh uss bare mein sochke apne aap ko takleef mat do..

Rey: Nahi Taani jo bhi hua tha meri vajah se hua tha...iske liye Niki ne mujhe aaj tak maaf nhi kiya hai...

*Taani was a bit surprised hearing this...as from the time Niki nd Rey have met they have been inseparable...then why is he saying ki Niki ne usse maaf nahi kiya*

Taani: Pehle toh aap rona band karo...

(She wipes off tears from his face and makes him get up...Rey gets up checks the fuse...its alright..he makes a call and comes to know that there is a power cut for 3 hours cause of some problem...TaaRey come in the hall)

Swayam: Rey kitni der lagadi...kya hua..(Rey explains about the power cut)..ohh atcha..

(No one can see his face clearly cause of the dim light of the candles..no one can see how much he has cried)

Rey: Mein fresh hoke aata hun...fuse ke chakkar mein haath gande ho gaye...

(Rey leaves for his room...Taani follows)

*In Rey's room*

Taani: Rey aap theek toh hai na..?? Aap please tension mat lo...Niki ka ye darkness ka darr jald hi dur ho jayega..aap aisi ROTLU shakal leke neeche jaoge..??LOL

(Rey embraces Taani really tightlyHug...their bodies plastered...even air cannot pass from between them)

Rey: Thanks Taani...

Taani (startled): Thanks kyun..??

Rey: Meri help karne ke liye Nik ke cure mein...

Taani: Jab Niki puri tarah se theek ho jayegi tab mujhe thanks bolna..

(They both sitting in Rey's room [like they were sitting in Taani's room after confession] and are looking in each others eyes living the moment together and making promises to each other to stay by each others side through their eyes)

 *Door opens and Swayam comes in*

(By the noise of the door they come out of their trance)

Swayam (feeling a bit awkwardConfused): Rey tum yaha fresh hone ke liye aaye the..right..??

Rey: Haan..vo me..vo..ha hum bas aa hi rhe the neeche..haina Taani..??

Taani: Haan bhai..hum aa hi rahe the ki aap aa gaye..

Swayam: Ok chalo..sab log kabse tum dono ka wait kar rhe hai...

(All of them come in the hall)

Vicky: Chalo na guys kuch khelte hai...

Nil: Truth or dare..???

(All agree...all sit in a circle..TaaRey sitting opposite to each other...Swayam on one side of Rey while Vicky on other side...Niki is sitting between Sharon n Taani)


Aur socha nhi jaa rha...abhi ke liya bas itna...

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Edited by sashaz_sis - 15 April 2014 at 3:12am

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
jus loved the update...and taani is jus so sweet and understanding...
cant wait for the next part...update soon =D

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Mindblwng update.thanx 4 pm.plz plz plz nxt part cntnu soon asap.

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