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#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 2) COMPLETED (Page 17)

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
awesome stry...
lovd d update...
niki s really nice charactr...
plz update soon n pm me plz/...

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vijichandran

awesome stry...
lovd d update...
niki s really nice charactr...
plz update soon n pm me plz/...

thanx a lot...Big smile
m happy dat u liked Niki's characterSmile
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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
wow amazing story ...loved it :) :)
waiting for next update :)
keep it up

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
hey amazing story
loved all the parts
when u update the next part please pmme

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged

Hello mere pyaare pyaare dosto.Hug I'm back with an update.

Finally my exams are over! Yeh meri taraf se ek treat hi samajh lo.LOL

Okay abh jyada bore nahi karungi. Here you go.


Part 9


After the party everyone is heading to the parking lot. [Taani and Niki walking ahead, followed by Reyam and then rest of the gang.]

Three men come from behind the pillars and surround Taani and Niki. Taani is too scared to react seeing the knives and guns in their hands but Niki recognizes something and keeps her calm as she knows screaming and shouting will get them into trouble.

One of the men points his gun to Taani and asks her to call Rey. Taani is unable to react. She gets more scared when the man asks her to call Rey. Sensing Taani's fright Niki dials Rey's number.

*Here with ReYam*

Rey: Yeh Taani and Nik kaha gaye? Itni kya jaldi hai unhe jo bhaag rahe hai?Confused

Swayam: Sahi keh raha hai tu. Yeh dono kuch jyada hi aage chali gayi hai and gang ko dekho chalne ka naam hi nahi le rahi.

Rey: (to the gang behind) Guys jaldi chalo. Ghar nahi jana kya?

*Tring Tring*

Rey: Nik? Yeh kyu call kar rhi hai? (picks up) Ya Nik bas two mins hum sab pohoch hi rahe hai.

Niki: Rey vo..

Taani:Shocked Niki nahi phone cut karo. Don't call him. No!Shocked

Man 1: Oye ladki apni jaan pyaari hai toh chup raho aur tum (to Niki) jaldi usse yahan bulao. Warna.. Evil Smile

Niki: Rey tum jaldi se parking lot ke pillar no. 16 ke paas aao. Please come fast.

Rey: Nik hua kya hai? Taani itni kyu dari hui hai? Aur vo kon tha?

Man 2: (Takes away the phone from Niki) Mr. Reyansh Singhania agar tum inn dono ko sahi salamat dekhna chahate ho toh jaldi yahan aao. Aur haan apne doston ko mat lana, warna yeh dono jinda nahi bachegi. (cuts the phone)

Rey: Hello? Hello? Damn!Angry

Swayam: Rey kya hua hai?

Rey: Nik ne mujhe REY bulaya? And vo itni calm kyu thi? And vo log hai kaun?

Swayam: Kaun log? Rey bata hua kya hai?

Rey: Kisi ne Taani and Nik ko kidnap kar liya hai and vo muje bula rahe hai. Mujhe jaana hoga.

Swayam: Ruk Rey mein bhi aa raha hun.

Rey: Nahi. Mujhe akele bulaya hai and Nik ka behavior bhi kuch alag tha. Kuch toh gadbad hai. Swayam tu kaam kar gang ko leke pillar 16 ke waha aa. But make sure unn kidnappers ko pata na chale. I'm going, you come with the gang.

(Here with Taani and Niki)

Niki: (whispering to Taani) Taani tum aise hi dari hui rehna and kuch bhi hojaye hum inn logon ko Yansh ko  yahan se akele nahi le jane denge. Got it? (Taani nods. She isn't sure if it's the right thing to do or not but agrees to what Niki says.)

*Rey comes [to the rescueLOL] near the pillar*

Rey: Mein aa gaya, abh inko chod do!

(Niki signals Taani. Rey notices.)

Taani: Nahi mein aapko chod ke kahin nahi jaungi.Cry

Rey: Taani please. Nik tum please samjhao isse.

Niki: Rey hum dono tumhare saath chalenge. Tumhe kuch hogaya toh?Disapprove

Rey: Parrr..

Man 3: Agar tum logon ki baate khatam ho chuki ho toh hum kuch bole?Angry

Man 1: Reyansh gaadi ki driver's seat pe baitho. Abhi! (Rey keeps mum and walks towards the car.)

Niki: Rey please inki baate maan lo. Mujhe darr lag raha hai. Inhone bola na PHONE chalao toh please chala lo.Wink (emphasizing on the word phone)

(Rey gets her message and slowly removes his phone and dials Swayam. Keeps the call on and slides the phone in his pocket.)

Man 2: Phone? Gaadi chalane bola hai. Phone nahi.Angry

Rey: Jaa raha hun chalane. Aur uspe chillao mat, vo gaadi ko phone bolti hai.AngryAngry

(The gang is watching all this hiding behind the cars in the parking lot. They are confused.Confused Swayam picks his phone and keeps it on.)

Swayam: Yeh Niki itni calm kyu hai? And Rey vo bhi chup chaap maan raha hai?

Sharon: (Realizing Niki's tone senses that she has a full proof plan to get out of it.) Swayam I know ki Taani tumhari behen hai and tum uski wajah se hyper ho rahe ho but please calm down. Niki has some plan. Let's just follow it. (All agree.)

(Rey sits on the drivers's seat and one of the men sits on passengers seat. Taani and Niki behind them and the other two men behind them with their guns pointing towards Taani and Niki. [Imagine the car to be Scorpio] They drive off. The gang gets into their car and follows them.)

Taani: (whispers to Niki) Rey ko kuch nahi hoga na?Disapprove

Niki: (whispers) Trust me Yansh ko kuch nahi hoga.

Rey: Tumne inko kyu pakda? Kaam mujhse tha na?

Man 1: Jab tak heroine problem mein na phase toh hero kaise aayaga? Tumhe kidnap karne ka mohra [trap] bani yeh bechaari.Evil Smile

Niki: (gigglingLOLLOL) Tum bohot filmy ho. Hero heroine and all. Waise mein soch rahi thi, aap teeno vo jail ke black and white uniform mein kaise langenge,LOL aakhir wahin jane wale ho tum sab, jald hi.Evil Smile

Man 2: Tu hume jail bhijwayegi?

Niki: Na na na. Tum log khud hi jaoge.Evil Smile

(Rey looks in the mirror and sees that the gang is following them at a safe distance and is relieved.Approve Then his eyes fall on Taani's crying image in the mirror. He is unable to see her so scared and crying for him. His eyes start becoming wet as well seeing her.Cry Taani feels Rey's gaze on her. [which is getting reflected from the mirrorWink] She looks in the mirror and sees that his eyes are becoming wet. Taani quickly wipes away her tears and forces a smile.Smile Rey too assures her that all will be fine. He won't let anything happen to her.)


*Running to hide myself*LOL

Many of you wanted some thriller action packed update, but woh kya hai na mujhe kuch aur hi sujh raha tha.Wink

Sorry ki update mein TaaRey hardly the.Disapprove

I know yeh update bohot short and boring tha,Unhappy but I have some weird concept in my head (which will be Niki's plan) and uske liye yeh update zaruri tha.

So if you liked it then please do Like & CommentSmile



Edited by 2111_shweta - 16 October 2017 at 7:49am

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
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ll comment tom morn after reading Big smile

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very good shwetaThumbs Up

you have written so well


Edited by crazy2012 - 17 May 2013 at 8:17am

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 11:54am | IP Logged
awesum upate shweta...
that taarey small scene was super cute
loved it yaar
hayeee they understand eachother so well
update asap eagar to know niki's plan

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