Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meena_kannan
What a shocking start to chapter 2, Attractive, ruthless , affluent businessmen having physical relationship/s, no strings attached , is not unheard of but to visualise Ashutosh in such a scenario , you are right , correct tag line to this FF, Zor ka zhatka hai zoro se laga . Ten years leap, but Ashutosh has NOT actually moved on, lost all trust in people, friends, relations, even kept a distance from his parents . This mystery woman , seems to be a good friend too, is she integral to the story or just introduced to get an insight into the kind of person Ashutosh has turned into ? Is she Mallika (Armaans ex wife maybe...) Questions are increasing, answers mil nahi raha hai , suspense quotient increasing !
Who killed Aditi ? Hope we get some clues in chapter 3 ! Very interesting progression to the story , really well written !
Dr Ranganath seems to be a lovable character in this FF too ! i i think he and anji will be great moral support system for Nidhi!
Dr Armaan , Nidhis superior at KGH, refreshing change ! Waiting for Ashutosh , Armaan heart to heart talk !
Anji Nidhi friendship intact and their bond just seems to have grown stronger, Where is Rohan? Anji and Nidhi conversation, Anji trying to warn Nidhi,protect her , shows that Nidhi is clearly affected big time by her mistake or past immature deeds and changed to a completely different person, has matured more than her 25 years of age but she also has definitely NOT moved on , is she still crazy about Ashutosh ?Confusion hi confusion hai , solution ka pata nahi... But she has grown to become an attractive, strong , young woman, a great Doctor too,her goal was to become a good doctor and she did achieve it! ! Ashutosh and Nidhi meeting, very well written , sparks are flying , ruthless , arrogant , bitter, handsome business man and an expressionless, passive , cold , attractive young lady doctor , who seems to be passionate aboout her profession , has no business sense whatsoever- explosive combination , would love to read about their journey through your writing, so seat belts are fastened and ready for this roller coaster ride! Why did she immediately agree to marry Ashutosh? Yograj is, Nidhis father , just agreed/wanted this marriage , did not talk to Nidhi about it , did not give her time etc , hope I get some answers in the next update !
The last few lines , good luck wishes from Ashutosh to Nidhi very well written,I think she is really going to need it !
Overall very interesting ,completely hooked and really looking forward to the next update ! Please update sooonnn!
to date i think this is the lengthiest review that you have given...wow!!!
the introduction of Ashutosh in chapter 2 is to show the kind of person he has turned into during the last decade. she is just a woman...and as for his relationship with her, i have left it deliberately open ended...you can assume it was "just friends" / casual / dating / physically intimate. its totally up to the readers how you want to understand that part and as you rightly said, how much of an Ashutosh character change you all can digest...
rest of the questions, you have to wait for the answers...
good to know that you are hooked...hope you are ready to be cooked...