Your Love or My Hatred? [DISCONTINUED]

snehav1999 Newbie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
<font color="#3300ff">Hey Guys!!Smile</font>
<font color="#3300ff">So... I am writing a fanfiction on Arjun and Riya. Hope you guys like itTongue</font>
<font color="#3300ff">Oh, and, this fanfic begins from the part where the ETF Team are following the guy who had the deadly bacteria that spreads in the water.</font>
<font color="#3300ff">And, just so you know, anything that is typed up in any color except black is a message from the author(which is me) and anything typed up in black is the story!!SmileOh and this story will have different Point of Views as well.Big smile</font>

So, here it goes...

Riya's P.O.V.

I hope that we catch him before anything serious happens. Looking at those people mourning over the deaths of their beloved, children, and relatives... SO MUCH pain, how can he just so ruthlessly let these people die?


Is that him?

I walked carefully to the noise hoping that I would not be found and could catch the criminal before any harm is done.


I continued walking through the plants following the sound.
I hoped that it was just Chottu or Shree.

I was walking and suddenly there was a noise behind me, I turned and then... I fell into endless darkness.

Arjun's P.O.V.

Where is he? Why can't I find him?

"Rathore, Shree, Chotu, Riya?"
"What happened Rawte?" and three "Yes Sir"'s came back into my ears as a reply.
"Have any of you found him yet?"
"No!!" Came back four replies. But suddenly-


And I ran towards the scream, the scream of my colleague, the scream of the only girl in our team, and I ran.

ran to find the criminal holding Riya as a hostage.
But I knew that I was late, nothing could save her now.

I looked into her eyes, the eyes that had so many emotions...but I was surprised. I was surprised because this girl, being held as a hostage in front of me, was NOT scared.

She is not scared
The Riya, who was afraid of firing at a human was not scared when she was the brink of dying.

And then I realized, I realized how much she cared, and how ruthless I was with her.
But no, I couldn't do anything as I watched her swallow the bacteria.

And I unconsciously picked up my h=gun and shot the guys, screaming, "RIYA!!"

But I knew she was dying and there was nothing I could do.

<font color="#3300ff">Ok, so this might seem a bit depressing, but I was only trying to introduce the story to you.</font>
<font color="#3300ff">Precap- Is Riya actually dead?</font>

<font color="#3300ff">Hope you guys liked it and it will get interesting later on, so PLEASE continue reading!!</font>

<font color="#3300ff"> Should I continue?</font>

<font color="#990000">INDEX</font>
<font color="#990000">The Truth or what? - at the top</font>
<font color="#990000">A Mission Found - page 4</font>
<font color="#990000">The ACTUAL Truth - page 5</font>
<font color="#990000">A Past Uncovered - page 7</font>
<font color="#990000">Determined to Know - page 10</font>(I would post the link but I am not allowed to yet :P)

Edited by snehav1999 - 06 September 2013 at 11:20am

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sumbulqaiser IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
nice prologue continue soon,
is this Ariya's story? 

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snehav1999 Newbie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumbulqaiser

nice prologue continue soon,
is this Ariya's story?

Yep this is going to be an Ariya story. It might seem like it isn't, but I am going to post the next few chapters soon and then everything will be cleared. Wink
Hue.Splash IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11747

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
If its ariya then continue
n thanks fr pm..
I actuallt wanted ny ff like this..
Thank u .
fatima15 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 8:59pm | IP Logged

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devildiva21 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
great start yr...
hope riya is alive...continue soon...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
iluvrainaarti Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Great start. Can't wait for the next update.
ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Thanx for making this ff to ariya. I really enjuy your prologue. Hope riya is alive cant wait to read the next part do continue soon and pm me also

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