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Arhi FF#9: Mind Games *Ch 13 pg1, NOTE pg35!* (Page 36)

rulama IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 10:51pm | IP Logged

TINA, loved the update!

So Buaji is still hackled that Khushi has not married the guy of her choice?! And now she is badi bahu where as her pretty Payaliya is relegated to be the chotti! Hai re Nandkisore! She'll not at all be pleasing her Nandkisore!! Then what will she do when she dies!!!? Loved Taffy! There is one loyal friend like The Trio Anjali, Juhi and Sarah.

Love their conversation through the mental link.

Love this Arnav-Khushi so besotted with each other but nobody is aware of their constant link!

Naughty Khushi! Making Arnav turn but having a good look at him through mirror! But I am sure Arnav does enjoy it! He too no less to tell her that all she need was a few lingerie, red silk sheets and Aprons!

Even Salman Khan takes priority over Arnav! And Arnav allows her!

Once again it is very clever of you to utilize the blanket scene and picture in this context.

Khushi shows how much she adores him when she tells what she wants to be called as. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada. ASR's wife is KASR. So one honeymoon per year! She gives what he seeks in a platter and that too aplenty!

Loved the house pic with translucent floor and fishes underwater underneath! Once again caring Arnav comes t the fore. A game of basketball. But Khushi's thinks if she does as he asks its teasing him!

Loved the update!

Thanks.



Edited by rulama - 09 April 2013 at 10:51pm

orchids8888 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Hey dear I have commented on blog.  Please check my comment on blog as and when you get time.TongueSmile
luvkkgasr Goldie
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
yayyy...Big smile
off to read d blog version now...  TongueWinkEmbarrassed
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 12:21am | IP Logged
YAY

OFF TO READ!

TINAAA YOU KEEP BLUSHING GIRL!!

I'MGOING TO GIVE YOU A DEEETAILED COMMENT!

LOL
fleurs IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged

Lovely update & thanks for the PM Smile

 

Uff! Buaji is never going to change.....The rituals at home where Anji teased Arnav non-stop was hilarious. Loved the ring-searching-rasam, especially when he slipped the ring onto her finger & kissed it.....it was so romantic Blushing

 

Arnav apologizing over his shoulder excusing his bride & himself that it was time for their flight which his sisters didn't obviously buy & in turn teased him was fun to read

 

Khushi's innocent & childlike character was well brought out in the flight scene

Oh ho Mrs.Raizada haven't you still learnt that you shouldn't challenge ASR.....nothing is impossible for him....Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada sounds perfect

 

Wow! Khushi's demands are unbelievable

 

The house you described was really different & tasteful....fishes swimming beneath the floor & the house with a private beach...awesome

 

Arnav planning for a basketball game once he sensed her nervousness was so thoughtful of him & Khushi understanding his move & planning not to spoil their beautiful honeymoon with her nervousness followed by their passionate night was beautifully portrayed

 

They are an amazing couple understanding the other & doing thingskeeping in mind their partner's wishes & comfort level

 

Tina & Taffy, your joint venture was a great hit.....loved the VM ...the scenes you chose were awesome.....to tell the truth though I couldn't follow much of the lyrics since I don't know Hindi, the VM was a treat to the eyes...loved the last scene you chose for theclosure of the VM Hug

 

So excited to read Mind Games Vol 3 Day Dreaming

 

 

 



Edited by fleurs - 10 April 2013 at 2:13pm
wonderblake IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
OMG that was really blush worthy Tina.
loved both the versions.

Hoping to see you soon with Mind Games vol 3.
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:25am | IP Logged
loved both the versions and love you sweet...and anything you write...WinkWinkWinkWink
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Damn hot update, loved it. Finally they are one, Precap is smoking hotEmbarrassed

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