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Arhi FF#9: Mind Games *Ch 13 pg1, NOTE pg35!* (Page 2)

narcy24 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
EDIT...that was a crazy update and a roller coaster ride of emotions...
I enjoyed how careful Arnav had been ...and how Khushi became bold...
We will be eagerly waiting for MG Vol sounds interesting...
Thanks for sharing with us your work.
AMAZING update.

Edited by narcy24 - 07 April 2013 at 5:13pm

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MahimaMV Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 4:39pm | IP Logged

I'm very very very very sorryOuch
I know i'm hell late to commentCryCry I was busy with my project work n i wanted to giv a long comment for this n Desert Heat which was difficult from my cell phone,so...

FantasticClap, lovelyStar, beautifulHeart, romanticEmbarrassed n hotBlushing update

The banner made me crazySilly, its beautiful...

Loved it... They both were so restless to go to their honeymoonEmbarrassed, the way he asked Anji was funnyLOL

Awww, Arnav helped Khushi to take off her jewelryDay Dreaming.. That was so sweet... Naughty Khushi, she didn't peek bt enjoyed the view by looking at him through the mirrorLOL
Khushi n her Salman!! No one can even dare to come bw themLOL
Poor ArnieLOL Khushi is so innocent n childlike which i love very much...
The blanket was really cute n lovelyHeart
( u r amazing TinaStar, from where do u get these unique ideas after writing an N number of romantic scenes? wish u wud have been CV of IPKKND)

The pic which has an aquarium is mindblowing...(Even i was shocked to see that... I just love water i mean ocean, sea beach n also fish)
They are having beach in front of their roomDay Dreaming This is just perfect place for honeymoon coupleEmbarrassed
Aww to make her feel comfortable Arnav thought of a basket ball gameLOL to which Khushi was bowledLOLLOL

Then the most happening Suhaag Raat(read in blog, it was really hotBlushing) which was really beautiful n ofcourse hotEmbarrassed

Nw waiting for the 100 things to do in HoneymoonEmbarrassedBlushing

Thank u for the pm TinaSmile

Edited by MahimaMV - 22 April 2013 at 4:59am
KtotheM IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Congo on the new thread

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shali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Your writing
Thumbs Up Party
I spend yesterday reading your FF...
Loved it...and hooked...
Thank you so much...

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sruthiif Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
I am so excited for vol III with this passionate chapter...
I'll be stalking your blog for the other version...Embarrassed
Private beach...basket ball court... bubble bath...OMG...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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mbibi Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
Hawww the end is bittersweet! This was the last chapter on this journey of mind games but now we have the next installment to look forward to...and it starts with a bubble bath? *blush** 

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Reader_Hobby Goldie

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
Wow! I remember when I was reading the first few chapters of this story of Volume 1 of Mind Games ... time has just flown by!!! I thought wow! What an amazingly well-written story with a concept that I've not come across before. Hats off to you! Awesome! I mean nothing I can say will justify how well you write your stories, the ideas you come up with, creativity etc. ClapClapClap Thankyou for sharing your marvellous work with us all. I really well and truely do appreciate this.
As for the new thread, well congrats on that!
Trust Arnav to play about a little ... LOL ... I don't blame him! Sooo adorable. Naughty is perhaps a better word to describe his little antics here.
Kisses, teasing, touches, glances ... ahhh loved every moment of it! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Awww ... bless him. A real gent Arnav is. He wants to make Khushi comfortable in regards with them getting intimate. He wants to make sure that she is relaxed, happy and sure that she wants to go ahead with them getting physically closer to one another. I respect him even more.
Passionate. Hungry. Insatiable. Loving. Tender at times. Fiery at others. EmbarrassedWink

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ami_princess IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
OMG finallly! i was checking on this story everyday! i loveee it :D love it :D Thamk you for giving us such a lovely story :) i really enjoyed reading it every single time ! 

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