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The Contrast (Swaron OS) (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Beautiful piece, dude. :D

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
wow this is amazing :)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
IT WAS AN AMAZING OS...
loved it..
gr8 work
wanted this to happen in d3...

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
That was superb piece of work

Sharon pov after loosing dance nd being asthma patient was nice
Sharon pov for swayam was awesome
i really loved it
altogether diff concept based os

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
i love this one...what a language...and the feel of it...
 
how did i miss this on the forum?
 
sent you a buddy requuest...do send me a pm next time you write.
 
love---medha

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 4:22pm | IP Logged

This was a completely splendid wrk... Magnificient.. Well I thought dat Sharon asthma track mi8 go in dis way but nevermind.. It ws extremely well penned... Dis OS z into the skin of Sharon.. Sharon's PoV z shown amzingly.. Absolutely perfect.. Spcly luvd the prt how she z still living nd njoying dance thru sumone hu she luvs..."The other kind of breathing someone else does for me." How she finds herself njoyin even wen she z among the crowd nd z nt dancin... I luvd the prt where u mentioned how Swayam finds her among the crowd.. nd den " I just feel he wasted a precious moment staring at me."-dis is completely Sharon.. " May be that's why when i watch him dance i end up finding myself. It doesn't seem like a loss anymore." These lyn would be my favorite from the write up..These were beautiful... An amzingly written write up... Do write mre...

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Shal Hug
It feels so nice to see you after such a long time, mate. Incredibly penned. 
The beginning couldn't have been more perfect. 
The mark of intelligence is being able to accept life with all its limitations and acknowledge that limitations exist for your own good.
^^It's sheer beauty, you know. Embarrassed

You justified Sharon so well. Her perspective was very well-depicted. It's absolutely pleasurable to read something which transforms from ache to gratitude. You captured Swayum from Sharon's eyes, which again is a treasured rarity. These lines are something indeed :-

I wonder how Swayam manages to find me in the crowd every time and why at all he lets his gaze wander in my direction when he should really be busy listening to his own heart beat.

The last para concludes the plot perfectly. 

Perhaps opposites attract because our own sense of self is heightened when we perceive someone who is nothing like us. May be that's why when i watch him dance i end up finding myself. It doesn't seem like a loss anymore. So before i congratulate him on his performance or tell him that i cant be any more proud of him even if i tried, may be i should thank him for being such a contrasting personality.

The part in red says it all. The situation metamorphoses from poignancy to satisfaction.
Fabulously written Shal. All the best for your exams.

-Niki 





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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
well this something extra ordinary...
I thought it would be either a romantic OS but u denied it to be one... then I thought of it to be one with sad ending..
but it carries the sweet essence of love that Sharon feels for Swayam. its exceptionally beautiful.
no doubt exams get minds working in these directions.

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