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ArsHi FF(bold): Fix my soul.*ch8 p122 updt 8/6 (Page 83)

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
nice updateClap

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Wowww babes only you could make me speechless with such a chapter, which is like a preview of reality ...
 
This story is telling the different shades of people and i found myself kinda addicted to it ... lolz ...!!!!!!
 
The past that made ASR from a love struck Arnav is really sad ...
 
He is like a dark prince now, and i hope our Angel Khushi is gonna lift that darknes from him and fill lots of love and lite in his life ...
 
PLZ PLZ PLZ update again soon ...
 
Thanks sop much for PMs ...

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
ASR felt a warmth again when he called him that...he dont know ...but hearing his name as ASR was indeed different from someone calling him arnav... only his mom...sometimes his dii do...and now shaleen... (hope he would turn out to be Arnav's Jeeju soon...Day Dreaming)
 
ASR went in...he saw his reflection on the mirror...
his rage filling the room...his eyes spatting fire ...thinking of his dii's marriage...thats the strat point of all their misery... THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... (mistake of the changes whch turned him to be wat he is today... Unhappy)
 
bubly...cute...her dimple ..innocent and sweet...she looked...
he said it all sarcastically with a smile...
but she is not so... he added a little later...  (a DEVIL in disguise indeed... )
 
 
she..she had her own charm...and i fell for her... (WITCH... )
 
 
i was head over heels for her...i loved her...so much...
now his eyes too got wet... (poor guy... No)
 
 
and then dii confronted lav...lav accepted that she likes me but it will be good to get married with elders wish rather dating... (ohhh...behaving very cultural n traditional type gal...good actress huh...)
 
seeing this vulnerable side of arnav...shaleen was taken aback seriously... there was so much hidden behind the mask of ruthless business tycoon... behind every DON there's a story, behind every MAN there's a past...*credit to the movie Billa 2*)
 
dii-jeeju were so in love...i always admire them...jeeju takes immense care in dii's details... i was happy that i gave her hand in someone worth and responsible...i did good in place of my maa and dad... (these sentence do carries the pride of the man even if u didn't mention it in the following sentence...i can really feel the pride of a younger brother who manage to fulfil the honour whch was supposed to belong to the parents only...he took responsibility of his parents towards his dii, n he did complete it flawessly... )
 
lavanya turned demanding after marriage..i saw a drastic change in her...she was no more traditional... (yeh...hw can one remain fake forever...the true color hav to be out na...)
 
i was so in love with her that i failed to see through the truth behind her ... (well this is where we call "Love is blind", actually not the Love whch is blind, its the ppl in love who cannot see their loved one's mistake, is blind)
 
she bribed a lorry men to knock down dii's car and...
and ...
when its about to happen..
jeeju ran his car between dii's car and that lorry...
jeeju died infront of dii's eyes crushed between the steel plates of the car...
his body was crushed and squeezed...
losing her love before her eyes...dii lost her trance...and since then...
( n this is wat i col true love...poor Syham...  Cry )
 
y did ur wife... i mean... (he was supposed to ask why she is unfaithful ...rite???)

 
ASR : s*x  (okay...these is the part i was damn shocked...Shocked was she phsically not satisfied wth him or sumthng??? is this sumhow the reason for Arnav avoiding Khushi n afraid to fall her ??? or he's scared to fall in love again because he's afraid of being cheated again?...hmmm...Thinking)
 
 
u r brilliant Saranya...i think now oni the story is getting on its track n getting hotter to read...
n u hav to leave it in a cliffhanger...???.

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
loved it
 
he was love with a mirage
 
he lost his trust on love bcoz of one
 
maybe he will again it bcoz of Khushi

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
loved it
 
he was love with a mirage
 
he lost his trust on love bcoz of one
 
maybe he will again it bcoz of Khushi

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 1:12am | IP Logged
such a painful past buddy 
brilliant work :)

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Shit,here Anjali ka pati is really a Pati-Dev ha?! great..

Lavanya, you can't value ASR then go die..

very tidy presentation!
well written..

go on didi.. :)

p.s.-sorry for late.. Embarrassed

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