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ArsHi FF(bold): Fix my soul.*ch8 p122 updt 8/6 (Page 41)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -saranya-

Originally posted by meena_raveena

ok...i'm quite confused with tis chapter ...Confused
 
"he dont have a valid reason but..he wanted to gave a glimpse of her before he leave to work... " (does tis means he came to meet her everyday...or only today aftr he got news SHE's resuming her work again, msg frm aman...or was the msg not abt her??? Ermm)
 
if he comes to meet her everytime thn what does tis sentences means???
"he wished to see her once FOR THE FIRST TIME..."(he hav never met KHUSHI before tis?? Shocked
at first i dunno its KHUSHI, but wen u mention hazel eyes, i kno it hav to be KHUSHI.)
 
"clear things to bring back life in her eyes...! " (if Arnav hav never met her, why he want to do tis??? Wacko)
 
"a mist of loneliness...
a pain of punishment..
a hurt of missing loved one...
a search to peace...
a craving for love..! " (what she did, to get punished???Shocked hope she doesn't get punished like in BSBA Khushi )
'no...no...i cant fall for her charm...NO... ' (if he hav never met her before, than how's tis??? Confused)
 
"his SUV ran through the streets of delhi... to reach his farmhouse for a sizzling session of making out with his model to ease out his frustation in the form of having an intercourse...!
its his routine way though...he lost his belief on 'making love' to a girl quite some time back...! "
(tis ARNAV looks quite similar to the ARNAV frm ONE NIGHT STAND 2. I mean the way he choose to hav intercourse to release his frustration.)  

hope i really don't turned to wacko...so to avoid tat, u hav to update the next Chapter as soon as possible, before i really become tis...Wacko 

"those eyes of her!! "
(U describe beautifully this "eyes" part , n giv a beautiful intro to KHUSHI...Thumbs Up)
 

 
 
 

he is seeing kushi for the frst tym... 

he just wanted or felt like to see her today b4 leavng fr wrk...

wht things he wanna clear...u'l knw...

no punishment fr kushi like bsba dnt worry...

just cz he felt his inner effects on seeing only her eyes...he is afraid he might fall for her...tat he chanted mentally tat he will nvr fall fr her... 

and arnav here isnt like ons2... 
he is lot more dif...u'l knw... Smile 

hope i cleared ur doubts..if u hav any plz feel free to pm me...
thanks for the reply Saranya...n yah...my doubt are clear...thank you...Smile

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
thanks for the pm saranya


nice update


but hope arnav will not do any mistake



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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
I hit the 81st like! ROFL

*

okay,I thought it should never end.
:-P

tom my marketing management paper, and there also I read s.u.v. written. LOL

okay,coming to the update,wow!
I am not commenting in deep,but just keep in mind k am reading and enjoyng .

update next and pm me plz. :-)

thanks. :-*

great going!
Day Dreaming

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
im curious what la was to him his ex wife or ex fiance  
n khushi what is she to him
interesting update
continue soonSmile

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
interesting update, contn soonSmile

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
So he is seeing Khushi 4 d 1st time...
Ow she s relatd 2 Arnav??
Who s her bro??

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged


AUTHOR'S NOTE... 

hi every one.. here im fairly writing sumthng sensible i gues...all this is because of my inspiration...
im just more than crazy for ONS2 by APPY_INDY dii... and i just look up to her since she brought PAWN to light... 
my this story is truly a variant frm my others...and this is my token of love and respct for PAWN.. i dedicate this whole story to APPY_INDY dii... 

if u are not  so much comfortable reading a HARSH REALITY OF THIS SOCIETY...thn plz skip ths stry of mine... this is close to me as im dedicating it to appy dii and i cnt afford to hear bashes on the same... 

if u arent feeling comfortable plz SKIP ths story...if a handful of ppl join me in ths journey and appreciate tats enough fr me...  

                                           ~*****************~ 

chapter 3 

twisted destiny... 
(suggested by momo121...i said na i'l use u guys suggestions in due course... Smilemany had a lot doubts on chap 2 so i thought to gve u guys the nxt soon to clear u guys 


his SUV ran through the streets of  delhi... to reach his farmhouse for a sizzling session of making out with his model to ease out his frustation in the form of having an intercourse...! 

its his routine way 
he lost his belief on 'making love' to a girl quite some time 

he parked his car infront of his farmhouse...a serene plance to spend a leisure time...
but his purposes were different though...

when he reached inside..he was been greeted by his maids... 
and he saw varsha....his one of the models for AR... seated comfortably on the big sofa...

she was wearing a ultra mini skirt and a tight top with deep cut front just to expose herself to his eyes... 

he smirked seeing her...afterall he knew how girls go head over heel seeing his charm...

all want to throw themselves to him...motives is what make difference in them...

some for fame...

some for damn pleasure... 

some for money...

some for obsession... 

some for chances...

some for career...

some for fun...


he signalled his maid to move and he did obey his boss command...
he walked to her and she came forward to hug him...
arnav dint hug her back...

she traced his face with her hands... ruffled his hair...and fisted a handful to bring him closer...

she rubbed his stubble with her lips and spoke on his lips..so near...
so convinient to capture them...

varsha : i was waiting for u darling...
she spoke huskily... 

he smiled watching her do her moves of foreplay with him...he never gave a damn to  all those things now...

he never think twice to harm a girl on bed now...whoever is capable to cope up with him can do...rest can die in pain and he dont give a damn for those who suffer... 

he lost his sense of being soft towards a girl...due to obvious reasons...
well even if he tries, its been manipulated by HIS WIFE to be hard on bed in his past...

he repent every single time he made LOVE  to her...yes..he did... 

and whenever he did try to get intimate with a girl he use to get the images of being in bed with LAVANYA... which he repent bad now...

guilt killed him from inside...

and all he try is to get rid of those images that keep flashing in his mind... 

he dragged varsha to his room...

ASR: undress urself...and then undress me...

he went to his minibar which he set at a corner to have a sip of his fav beverage...

all through now..he have never undressed a girl..its like they want me then they need to come to me...

varsha discarded her clothes in few secs and advanced to him...

she did the same with him feeling his perfectly tone body with her hands...

placing small wet kisses here one and there one on his chest randomly... 

he just her her hands and pushed her to the bed...

she fell down on it supporting herself with her elbow..

he pinned her hands above her head and started to devour her...


hmmmph...mmm...mmmhh...hmmm... huuhhh...hmmmph...

he was riding inside her with his full force...grunting...panting..increasing his pace with his evry single tym... 

she was gasping for breath... she was all sore there...
stil wanting more... 

god she is such a b**ch 
he bit her all over brutally... as if plucking away her assests with his teeths...  

he vent out his all frustation on her...he wanted his memories to fade...the moments tat he cherished doing the same in the past with HER... 

but strangely he dint get any image of LAVANYA today..
its just KUSHI'S eyes that haunted him...and once his mind showed him kushi's eyes he snapped open his eyes...

he stopped...! 

he was restless and wanted to do it...but when those same eyes came to him he was dumb to move any further...

he left her instantly... abruptly..! 

both bodies exhausted to lie dwn...

she was still not satisfied...

but he was lost in those eyes which his mind bringing again and again to his memory lane...

she tried to snuggle towards him trying to make him continue what he was doing  but he shrugged her off forcefully tat she rolled on the bed and fell dwn...

his eyes spoke daggers to her... 
he only use GIRLS... no girl cn use him fr that matter...

he is ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... 

his mobile strted to ring... 

he tuk the call... panicked to see his home number...

arnav on ph : nani... dii...she is okay rgt!! his voice trembling... 

ya...yeahh...i'l be ter in sumtym...im cuming...

he collected his stuff and walked off to drive his car in full speed to RM... 
to reach his sister anjali...

********** 
RM  

he ran upstairs frm his car..nani was sitting holdng anjali in her arms...who was cryng..shivering badly... 

arnav : diii... 

anjali raised her lashes to him...

anjali : chote... woh...woh... 
she pointed in a direction and hugged him tightly kneeling dwn on the bed and he was standng holdng her...

arnav : shhh...shhh dii...im here dii...im here ...calm dwn...

his eyes moist... he hugged her tight...securely...

he questioned nani with his eyes... 
nani asked him to calm dwn her frst...

minutes passed by and she slept in his arms...

he lied her dwn..kissed her forehead and came out... 

arnav : wht happen nani? 

nani : woh...HP was arranging her stuffs in cupboard and this photo fell dwn frm the cupboard...seeing him she strtd cryng like always...

arnav tuk the frame...it was shyam- anjali's pic ..
anjali was leaning on to shyam lovingly...one cn see hw happily in love they were...
 
arnav closed his moist eyes...opened it in rage...he called out fr HP in roaring voice...

HP  ran to him...

HP : woh...arnav bhai...i wass...

**thud** 

there came a strng slap on HP's face and he fell dwn not able to cope up with it... 

HP was trembling...

dont u knw she is in depression and she shudnt be rememberd of her DEAD HUSBAND...
i told u to clear all things of him...where the hell did ths pop up now...?

he roared at him..who was in floor... holdng the frame in his hands.. 

nani : leav him chote...how long can we do this anyway..we need to get anjali out of this mess soon as possible...this is just not gud for her health chote...

ASR: but nani..he... 

nani: chote...leav hp...i think its better we take her to Dr. 
maybe a proper counselling will help her to get normal...

ASR: hmmm...

he walked to and fro for sumtym...

ASR:  i'll talk to the chief right away...  
he took out his phone... 

*ring ring** 

Dr.Gautham Singhania : hello..

ASR : hello doctor good morning..its ASR here... 

Dr. Gautham : ya Mr.ASR.. tell me..how can i help u...

ASR: ermm i mean i want ur opinion on my dii...

he narrated the whole story of anjali losing her husband unexpectedly and the mental trauma she facing now...
he too said him the recent happenings in the home some minutes back... 

Dr.Gautham : hmm...
i think its better to examine her in person..you see i cant make a opinion on a patient through phone..its not so good...

try to get her here...

ASR: fine then im bringing her now..make urself free before i reach there... 

Dr.Gautham wasnt surprised to here a almost order...its ASR rgt! 

he just agreed and arnav woke anjali up and asked her to get ready..

she refused so much but arnav insisted on it...and nani pleaded to her...she was left with nothing but to accept her nani's plead and her chote's order.. 

********* 

hospital 

after a brief  examination doctr gautham could barely assess her state...

he made nani take anjali outside and asked arnav to stay back...

gautham: ASR... you are right..its indeed a big blow for her..she seem to love her husband so much... 

ASR: yes... 

gautham: dont worry..she can be perfectly alright like before...we hav a best psychiatrist in our hospital..he hav studied in a well renowned university...he will surely make ur sister back to normal...

he tried to assure arnav...and arnav was glad to hear some positive things on her dii's recovery... 

ASR: fine then...were is he...what for we waiting then...

gautham : ahh..he is on personel leave today.. 

ASR: can u just call him and ask if he could come here... 

gautham : okay...

he dialed ... 

*********** 
kushi's yoga class... 

she had a warm time with her bhai... 

and when she was returning her mobile started to ring... 

*********** 

hospital 

the door clicked open and a charming handsome guy walked in... 

he always had a sweet smile on his face..

he extented his arms to dr.gautham and he asked him to have a seat... 

dr.gautham introduced ASR  to him...

he extended his hands to arnav...

hai..im shaleen... he smiled... 

arnav accepted his hands...

'arnav singh raizada' 

shaleen : well need nothing more to know u..ur name says it all...so tell me what u guys want me to do... 

ASR: i want u to treat my sister and gve her back to me in her previous lively form...dr.gautham is so sure that u can do it... 

he said the last line glancing at dr.gautham...

shaleen : well thanks dr. for having so much trust in me..
can i have the details please... 

dr.gautham handed over anjali's records to him...

shaleen: anjali singh raizada... 

ASR: my dii... 

shaleen smiled...he could see his love..possessiveness..protectiveness for his dii... 

shaleen : i think its a quite tricky but i can do her normal... 

maybe a series of counselling and some practises will do... 

he patted on arnav's shoulder assuring him...but arnav for the first time felt good by someone behaving that social with him..! 

shaleen's ph beeped... 

shaleen : well excuse me plz...will get back to u tmrw..9 a.m sharp...he declared and left... 

when he came outside... 

he answered the call... 

shaleen : kushi...whats the matter ..i just left u there and u calling me soon... 

kushi: bhai... i got my scholarship for my studies...

my principal called me now only... 

shaleen : wow thats grt..i would have done it kushi..why dont u accept my hand in this...

kushi : no bhai...i wanna reach my place independently... 

shaleen; hmm... fine then...but who is offering u that! 

kushi: AR group... 

Mr. Arnav singh raizada..

************ 

later in the afternoon...arnav put anjali to sleep again and he checked his ph which was bothering him from driving peacefully...

it had so many missed calls from aman... 

he dialed aman

ASR: wht is it aman...why hav u been callling me so many times! 

aman: i moved her scholarship ASR... 

her principal informed her the same... 

ASR: hmm... gud...will call u back... bye... 

************  


some weeks back in AR..

aman was wondered when arnav said him that he wants to offer a scholarship to a girl...

aman was surprised... 

aman: who is she?? 

arnav : i dnt knw... i wil give u the details once i get them myself from the detectives... 

aman: unbelivable ASR... 

u dnt even knw her name..i doubt u seen her b4...then what for this scholarship thing which u never ever did in ur lifetym...

Arnav : yess...
he screamed... 

i havent seen her...

i dnt knw her... 

i dnt even knw her name...

im not aware of her damn details...

but im gonna do...

cz im responsible damnit... 

he screamed at aman... 

aman was tongue tied...confused...

****************** 

thats it guys...
i tried to clear u guys...but many of u may hav confused more i dont knw...Confused

story is progressing i guess...

let me knw ur views... 

plz do hit like... its just a blink away..

and comment too... 















Edited by -saranya- - 21 June 2013 at 8:19am

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