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ArsHi FF(bold): Fix my soul.*ch8 p122 updt 8/6 (Page 22)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me first on your first chapterDancing I knew it! I knew it! I knew the first chapter would be an awesome one & I guessed rightParty

I loved the beginning part where you describe the state of the present Raizada mansion contrasting with the past. The way you have penned down the words were brilliant, mind-blowing.

The choice of words you used to describe Arnav's present state is really good. I really want to know what happened in his life, which made him stone hearted like this.

As far as my sixth sense says, I think the girl is Lavanya. And I think Arnav doesn't want his Di to know that her sister-in-law is alive or something like that.

It was a fantabulous updateClap

Anyway this story is full of mysteries, & I love mystery storiesLOL

I am already eagerly awaiting for the next chapterEmbarrassed

Plz update soonWink 


Edited by V3Od - 12 April 2013 at 1:08pm

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
love the characters ;)
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
res

edit

wah! so well drafted..

seems dark already by the style you used!

who is this 'she'?
is it Her? :p

waiting.

Edited by kuts - 12 April 2013 at 5:28pm

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 9:52am | IP Logged
resEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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unressEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

loved the banner
loved the chapter
how cau u??
mend ur words
in such a way
so that
u can inbuilt  
such an eagerness in the readers, towars ur works
jaiyahooo saran baby

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hey both are so mysterious to me
i can't even study for my exams peacefully

banner :
why arnav is like that??
what is the story behind him??
what is that which is there in his eyes  
is they are in
anger??
pain??
if so
who is responsible for it??
 
chapter:
what is arnav- nani talking abt??
who is that girl??
does arnav hate her??
from where she is related to RM??
where is she working??

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so say me
how can u expect me to study
if i touch my book
all these thoughts are haunting my mind
so
plz saran baby
have some mercy on us
update it soon

                      
                      




Edited by vajram - 13 April 2013 at 7:28am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Hey this is going really good ...
 
for the first chapter, there is a secret/mystery and i wanna know what it is ... am quiet demanding sometimes ... lolz ...
 
anyways can't wait to read more ...
 
Please update as soon as possible ...

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
nice one
w8ng for next!!


Edited by jisa - 12 April 2013 at 10:13am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
very interesting start.  loved it.

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