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Taarey & swaron ff 1st adventure-book of secrets (Page 19)

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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Awsum update di luvbed taarey n swaron romance n waiting for last questions answer n many more plz update soon di n congo di for job may u get all happiness..

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Wow bags u r doing an outstanding job! Plz update soon :)
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its intriguingly interesting. loved both chapters.. just awesome.. loved the mandala thing.. taanis smart re.. pls continue i want to know about the fragrance.. i love puzzles.. i kno u have more puzzles in ur stock..so im ready for this adventure.. one more thing romance was cute. pls continue.. congratz u got the job muaahHug.. sorry for my late reply...
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Ohh god!!!damn good..di...
Loved d whole part..tr and ss cute scenes wer lovely..
Bt d hillarious part was taani catching rey!heheh...i was lolin ol oer vyl i read it..nd is baar bhi aapne fabulously sab kuch explain kiya esp d codewaly part.i wonder ki aap cryptographer toh ni ho na..par i noe u r a software engineer ..nd di congo fo ur job!!
Next part jaldily update..vil be eagerly waitin to noe watz gonna happen further..
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ohh di ur ff just love it adventure n curiousity loved it n specially new things vich keeps on coming in each chap loved it n hope u 'll update soon n plz buddy me n pm bhi karna oka love u n firse update soon
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just read the cs and pro it was awesome dear loved it 
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Fab story...Loved it..enjoyed it.. update soon!! :D
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Before I update the next chapter..

1.i just wanna thank all you guys  who have supported me in this ff..this ff s really spl to me as I m  converting my passion into a stry form…so thank you guys….thankkk you n sorry I as I cannot reply to your comments individuallySmile

2.i m sorry I did nt explain that decoding part properly ..due to which many gt confused…nxt tym on this wont happen..so here is brief  explaination abt that

there were many pictures  carved on chest..if u would say the whole chest  was covered with pictures u wont be wrong…those pictures were kind of together to form a  5 scenes one on lid one  each on the sides of chest..taani decoded the pictures on each side or wall of the chest..underneath every picture was sanskrit word for them..so each scene formed a code..taani had to convert Sanskrit word for each picture into ancient egyption language n extract first letter of that word..and do the same for all other pictures..after joining 1st letter of each word she got sanskrit words for numbers ashtaavimshatihi (28) ,ekum(1),dasha(10),navadasha(19)  ..each number on each side of  the chest..

according to astrology people born on 28,1,10,19 have their rashi ruled by sun  god…(which is true)

so by joining these number in ascending order 1101928 number is obtained ..which formed a circle or mandala(my imagination)

..hence to unlock the chest rey found  huge circle  enclosing few pictures  on the lid..he presses the circle n  chest opens..

 

Hope this gives u a clear picture..of decoding part..

Ok now back to update

 

 

 

Chapter 3-shambhu..

Next morning few important people have  gathered in mr nair s cabin(mr sharma,taani ,rey,swaron,swayam n two more miltery officials,n a high govt official)..which is securely locked n made sound proof ,n any kind of signals n stuff are blocked…

Mr nair:rey my son!!start reading it..

Rey nods all have taken their seats..and rey begins to read(book is in Sanskrit .. rey translates as he reads)

Disclaimer:whatever I m going to write next is purely fiction except for few facts which  we strongly belive  in our religions..n I do not intend to hurt any religious beliefs..

Rey:kehte hai is bharaman (universe) ka nirman (creation) tab hota hai jab sari urja (energy) ek jaghe kendrit hoti hai(all the energy gets focused at a place) aur usi urja (energy) se bhraman  ka vinash bhi hota hai(acc to christain n Islamic belief) ..  anant  pani ke shrod(according to hindu mythology the whole space is full of water (kind of ocean)where lord Vishnu resides)mai se bharaman ka janam(birth) hota hai aur isi paani mai bhraman ka anat(end)..humare bharaman k tarha aese hai kai bramhan  hai  jiske bare mai hum nahi jante aur unka nirman  humare bramhan ki taraha hi hota hai..par jabhi kisi bramhan ka nirman  ya vinash hota hai  tabhi har bhraman mai  jeevan(life) pal  do pal k liye tham  jata hai(kind of time stops for some time.. every thing remains still till creation n death of the universe  neither a life is created or destroyed )..aur is prakriya(process) ke bare mai kabhi kisi bhi bhraman mai kisi bhi jeev (living being) jantu ko pata nhi chalta..saadiyo se bhraman ka nirman aur vinash aese hi hota arha hai..

Every one are silent  & seem to understand ..simultaneously taarey ,swaron are confused thinking what has creation of universe got to do with suryabhanu n artifact..they had lots of questions running in their minds bt they keep quite ..rey continues

Rey:ye ek aesa niyam hai jo bhul ke bhi kabhi toda nhi ja saqta..lekin hazaro billion saalo mai kabhi kabhi aesa hota hai k koi aesa jeev is niyam ka palan nhi karta..aur us jeev  mai is sansar ki har urja(enery) ka ek bhaag(part)saama jati hai .aur us jeev ko is shristi ka sab takatvar(strng) aur gyani jeev bana deta hai..us jeev mai bramhan,parkurti ki har gayan(information or knowledge(info abt how life,universe s created n stuff which none of us know and its still one of the greatest mysteries which will be difficult or may b next to impossible thing to unravel  )) sama jata hai.jo prakruti k niyamo ke khilaf h.aur aese hi kisi bhraman k vinash ke samye ek jeev ne ye niyam toda ..

Rey s shocked n stops..so r swaron & taani..

Mr nair asks rey to continue..rey says yes n continues

Rey: san 896 jab koso dur wale bhraman ka vinash ho rha tha to jaygarh ek ke garib saarthi(chariot driver)  ke ghar mai ek ladke ne janam liya..puri shristi taam gayi thi sivye is balak ke..aur is mai wo urja sama gayi..jise uski maa ki mrityu(death) hogayi usko janam dete waqt.yu to us balak ki mrityu apni maa ke garbh(womb)mai hi hogayi thi jab bramhan ke vinash ka sharuwat ho rha tha .lekin is balak mai urja ke sama jane se usmai fir se jaan agyi..uska chera tez aur sudar tha..uske pita ne uska naam sambhu rakha..shambhu sab ka ladka tha  khas kar apne pita ka  ..wo shambhu se beintaha pyaar karte the leking unhe ajeeb sa daar tha shambhu ko le ke..wo bahut takatwar aur tez tha ..wo jante the ki unka beta alag h aur is baat kar daar unko saatye jata tha..fir ek din jab shambu 7 saal ka tha.. khel khel mai shambu ko ek kutte ne kaat liya..shambu ne gusse mai us kutte ko kas ke pakda..aur wo kutta ek hi pal mai smoke(dhooa) ban gaya.tabi jaygarh mai dehsad phel gayi ..jaygarh ke raja ne shambhu ko marne (killing)ka aadesh (order) diya usi din..kyun ki shambhu ke pita usse bahut prem karte the  shambhu ko saat le kar raat mai siphaiyo se bachkar jaygrah humesha humesha k liye chod diya ..

By this all r shocked n confused.thinking if anything like this can happen.bt rey continues

aur wo suryapath agaye(suryabhanupratap s kingdom tht time he was prince)..shambhu ke saat..jaygrah k hadse k baad shabhu ka kabhi unke pita ne akele nhi choda..na hi ghar k bhar ane diya..wo bas mere saat kabhi kabhi khelte the jab kaka(shambhu s dad) bhar jate wo humse milne ate (suryabhanupratap & he was also arnd 8)..saal beete hum dono ek dusre k bahut ache dose bane aur shambhu ne hume apna raaz bataya..shambhu abhi apni takat ko niyantran(controlling) karna sikh gaye the ..par unka har cheez ke bre mai sab jana hume hairan kar deta tha ..kabhi Kabhi hume unse daar lagta tha unki ankho mai ek ajeeb sa junoon dikhta tha..aesa lagta tha ki unmai ek shaitaan palap rha hai jinko wo apne ap pe havi nhi hone dena cahte the)

rey (throat s going dry n his excitement s reaching new levels so s taayam n sharon s):sab thik chal rha thi..

fir ek din jab hum aur shambhu mele(fair) mai gaye tab ek khunkar sher(tiger) jo jungle se humare sehar(city) mai ghus gaya tha usne humpe humla kiya ..har jagha bhag dhad mach gayi thi..usne shambhu ke aur a ke uspe hamla kiya..tab shambhu  ne usdher ko ek haat se pakad liya aur wo sher bhi us kute ki tarha dhua(smoke) hogya..uska wajood hi khtam hogya..yeh sab dekh ke sab hairan aur chok gaye..fir se dehadad ka mahol ban gaya..sab shambhu se daar ne lage ..har koi unse dur bhag ne lage..aur logo ne humare pitaji ke pass aker iska hal nikal ne kaha..pitaji ne bahut samhjyapar praja(citizens) nhi mani aur hatash ho kar pitaji ko shambhu ko suryapath se jane ka adesh dena pada ..mai aur shambhu bahut hatash aur dukhi ho gaye..lekin shambhu ne kaha ki wo  panchaburiya(imaginary place in my stry it's the place where gods had created living being ) jaha wo jake apni shakti ko jane ka pryas karenge aur apne gyan ko ek nayi disha denge.aur wo chal pade..

rest of the story to be continued in nxt chapter…

now u guys must be confused how? So let me tell shambhu had powers to control life & 5 elements which forms life-earth, air,fire,water& ether(akasha))soo in one go he could destroy it!

By now u guys must hv gt to know abt the artifact n panchabhoota..

Precap:full stry n artifact reveled…journey to panchabhuriya..new puzzle..sneak peak of new puzzle

Shaani ,reyaam ,mr Sharma ,mr nair n few ppl reach panchbhuriya..to find a temple where the gods had created living beings…they reach the spot where the temple was said to be ..they a huge stone floor in form of  circle with ruined idols n a door way that led to a cave some where inside the ground..they enter the  entrance the walk a mile to find nothing but end of cave & soil n stones..the tunnel had ended..

Rey :yaha to ek mandir hona cahiye tha bt yaha to kuch bhi nhi siva ek  cave ka jo shuru hote hi khtam ho jata hai 

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