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pavi

@paviluvsvirika

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

love it so u r soo creative nd talented

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written..Loved it..

Superb update..

Loved how Jeevika surprised Viren for a change n made him feel better..

From driving the car to taking Viren to their fav spot the lake..

Just a blissful ending 😊

Thanks for the PM..

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome

thnx for the bonus

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Absolutely loved the update

Aww bless Virika love then to death

Love the trust between them

Lol Viren saying when did you learn to drive

Loved the dialogue's

Thanks Charu for bugging her to continue this story

Thanks for the pm

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

thank u so much for givin me extra part

it was brilliant

loved it

if possible den continue dis or start a new one please

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Sunita

@avni_19

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

i just felt i was readingg a fairy talee... wowww!!!!!! soo wowww... i hv nothing to say...i am loving ur updatesss n u r an awesomee writerr... ur updatee was mindblowinggg... keep continuinggg n pm me...thnkuu so muchhh ... greattt gng... :D :D

interestingg conceptt too... looking more forwarddd!!!

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ashna1406

@ashna1406

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

thanks for continuing :D :D

n it was awww <3 <3

i loved it once again :)

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update absolutely brilliant

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome yaar...really jeevs trusts him mre than herself...just superb...aww jeevs took him to the lake he showed to her...so sweet of her...thanks for the bonus part

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874301

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

wow thanks for the surprice and thanks for the pm.update was really beautiful that make me to adores virikas bond i want to read more from u,

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