VIRIKA OS : PAIN BONUS CH PAGE 5 - Page 3 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

sushmakryan @sushmakryan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing update thanks for the pm

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart) @Saba_Pari IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Simply amazing u described their emotions so well

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Surbhi Jain @surbhi1994 Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

it was damn cute

plz continue dis

seriously loved it

really wish d same happens in serial too

it was too emotional n touching

loved it

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mehwish123 @mehwish123 Goldie Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Ahh u again...:-P
Marvellous job dear

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KtYammie13 @KtYammie13 Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

res! Me gonna comment after sometime! please...forgive your bestiepie!

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Nikhat Shaikh @NikShaikh Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

superbbb os

reallly loved it

beautifullly written

thanks for the pms

pls write more of virika

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Ayesha @--Ayesha-- IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Dis os was just 😭

It made me emotionall n speechless.

Luvd how in d starting u kept d suspense i was so curious to know wts a prblm so i thought to scroll down n read bt i couldnt bcos i was just stick to every line.

Awww my poor viren😭 uss pagal ladki ki wajah se kitna kuch sehna pada...
Luvd d confidence of jeevika whn she held d police man collar.

Awww d ending was justtt... Luvd how she comforted viren.viren let go all his worried in his wifey lap.
Virika just hav a strongest bond nnooo one can break it.
Yahhh surely he indeed was jeevika's baby

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