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wow... emotions truely defined...

just loved it so much

awesome 
so sweet 
loved it 
next tym do pm me

An Awesome Portraying of Beautiful Relation based on Truth and Love

great going!!! love it.. pls Pm me for the next:)

Amazing story very well expressed
you are an awsome writter
Thanks for pm

Just loved it

reallyyy beautiful updateee...damnn greattt..i loved ittt... emotions were portrayeddd very well... somethng new where viren criess like real loud!!! new concept i gues..i hv never come a cross viren crying rather thn happy tears in this forum... truelyy beautiful piece of work... keep continuinggg n plss PM me...thnkuuu soo muchhh!!!!

absolutely brilliant totally loved it

Good work
The way jeevika consoled viren was very nice

i totally loved it