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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 88)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
This was so heart-warming and hilarious! I loved it. Now I have to go read your other works...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
its wonderful!!!!  i luv the movies that you chose and the story along with them... its nice one...

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RockBarbie

Originally posted by anjs

hey, reading ur story twice already :)

the end is simple u said and i understand ur logic for it but wud've loved to see a few of the loops closed...

like Anjali meeting her miss ponds skin...

and La realizing that Mr. Bournvita Eyes is none other then Arnav who loved Khushi's cooking...

maybe a simple short and sweet epilogue...what say, is it possible ?


Sorry, I don't think I will be writing an epilogue. The rest of the things are implied and will be explained to their friends in due time...after all, its a matter of time, isn't it?

Thanks for your comment..

RB

sad to hear that...Cry

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Awesome story. Just read it all in one go. Glad that you kept the ending simple leaving the rest to our imagination.

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged

It was simple,sweet story.Beautifully written.Heart
Payal,La,Akash,Anjali,Shyam being perfect side characters.Each played wonderful part.

Arnav and Khushi were so lovely.Day DreamingHeart

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Awesome part

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:25am | IP Logged
This deserves to be made into a chick flick. Period.

Simple, wonderful and everything that I liked. Your writing was a great to read, RB. You've found in me, a fan. :-)

P.S. - could have said a lot more things. But I'm commenting though my phone, sort of lazy to type a lot of words, and got to get back to books.

This was a lovely and refreshing read.
Cheers!

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
nice story.


luved it

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