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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 86)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
I don't know how to start.. Read all the chapters in a go and now feeling so heavenly~ ! I can't tell you, how much I enjoyed the story.. 

The whole journey had everyting in it.. Humour,  thrill, romance, philosophy.. what not..
Loved Anjali, Shyam, Lavanya, Payel... I have never found Shyam to be such pleasant man.. Lavanya and Payel's conversation were always treat..
Khushi's life, thoughts, behaviour, style... everything amazing! 

Arnav and Khushi met 3 times in the whole story and all were short encounters.. yet the magic of their love was spread out in the whole narration.

I laughed out loud so many times, specially during the first few chapters, lfelt like crying for Khushi in last chapter.. But finally they met and they met as if nothing happened.. Khushi's 3 words, 'you left me' and arnav's 'sorry' .. and they needed nothing..

Beautiful story, the naming of the chapters are amazing.. some are my favorite movies, specially Sleepless in Seattle..

I must also thank Lazyleaves for recommending it by her thread...

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Wow this was amazing. So simple, so beautiful... I just loved itSmile
This can actually be made into a movie u know. Would love to read your other works. Do u have an index to it all by any chance? Plz pm meEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged
hey, reading ur story twice already :)

the end is simple u said and i understand ur logic for it but wud've loved to see a few of the loops closed...

like Anjali meeting her miss ponds skin...

and La realizing that Mr. Bournvita Eyes is none other then Arnav who loved Khushi's cooking...

maybe a simple short and sweet epilogue...what say, is it possible ?

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Bookmarking for now. Will be back with a comment as and when I read it .

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
This was just awesome!! 
I loved the characters and their you chose in this SS... an i loved the thoughts that you shared as Khushi's dialogues .. it so made sense!! 
Beautiful! i feel content after reading it! 

And i thank Kalyani for navigating me here!! :)

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjs

hey, reading ur story twice already :)

the end is simple u said and i understand ur logic for it but wud've loved to see a few of the loops closed...

like Anjali meeting her miss ponds skin...

and La realizing that Mr. Bournvita Eyes is none other then Arnav who loved Khushi's cooking...

maybe a simple short and sweet epilogue...what say, is it possible ?


Sorry, I don't think I will be writing an epilogue. The rest of the things are implied and will be explained to their friends in due time...after all, its a matter of time, isn't it?

Thanks for your comment..

RB

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