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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 84)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
wow...its so awesome...I am just out of words...superb...loved it so much...

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Awesome story; loved it, how you kept things simple...no drama just everyday mundance stuff;

Hope to read more of your stories in future...

-Sona

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
lovely story.

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
I am ashamed with myself for having missed this fantastic story, earlier...but, may God bless the very benevolent Zehra, for dropping an email and, mentioning this story...Thank you !!!
 
Coming to the story, I loved the concept of incorporating the names of chick-flicks for each chapter...and, the story was simply, coruscating,.. the language , impeccable...it can be perceived that you are an adept raconteur!!! Thank you...and, I hope to read all your works, in the future...
 
PS : Zehra, thank you for bringing this story to the fore..and, also for the email :-))


Edited by Aanchal15 - 22 April 2013 at 8:43am

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
That was wonderful!! Loved how you weaved the story, with bursts of humor, melancholy and above all else the subtle romance!! I am glad I got a chance to read this!!

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
By god I tell u this is simply awesome story...
Loved it. 
Thank u lazyleaves for recommending the story

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
this ss is the inaugural one of Zehra's 'Story of the Week' thread... nice recommendation. i must say! the storyline was just great! my first thought on being introduced to khushi and her previous boyfriends was that she was constantly moulding herself to please them, rather than staying true to herself! truly awesome nicknames you came up with: Mr. Bournvita Eyes and Ms. Ponds Skin... totally unique but damn apt! this arnav sure has an understated sense of humor... his poker-faced comments / retorts just slew me... the shyam-arnav convo was hilarious, especially when it veered from the topic of girlfriends to that of boyfriends LOL! the witty repartees and humorous conversations were what kept me hooked on to this ss... that, and the fact that the protagonists shared my hobby of reading, especially light reading! the touch of seriousness in the last two chapters just added to the charm... like khushi, my respect for arnav grew when he put aside his personal happiness to concentrate on his responsibility toward his workers and their wellbeing... with India's lax laour laws and safety measures, not many owners would do so much for their workers!
 
the language and expressions used throughout were spot on, which is something I love to focus on! a thouroughly enjoyable read!

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged

Oh a great story!

Read all the parts in one go!

You are a brilliant writer!

Khushi found her true love and realized that he was the one!

Loved the other characters too...  Especially when all of them decided to visit the library just to have a glimpse of Ponds skin and Bournvita eyes!

Payal finds Khushi asleep after a marathon cooking session- this scene showed how innocent Khushi is and she deserves all the happiness in the world. Also said how much Payal loved Khushi and how much she valued their friendship...

Arnav is in love with her too...

Loved how the library was the background of their meetings...

Awesome one!

Thanks to Kalyaani for recommending this story!

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