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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RockBarbie




Thank you so much for your comments. I kinda agree with the chick flicks and Kishore Da's songs. I don't watch chick flicks anymore and after 90s music just sucks everywhere.

Before sunrise is a personal favorite but I don't think I could have accommodated here. I do like realism in my stories but sometimes I surrender to the gods of cliche as the genre has been beaten to death its best to succumb to a known devil rather than trying to do something new in a genre I am uncomfortable with. It took a lot not to turn it into angst though the beckoning was super strong.

Thanks again!
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Thank you for not going angsty (although it would have been interesting)..and you are right this story did demand a cliche. After writing this tale, I am sure you can no longer say you are uncomfortable with the genre! Moreover I cant wait to read "serendipity", although I have to say it was my least favourite movie of them all. Probably because I am the most impatient person on this planet. 

Mind if I ask you to recommend a story of yours that you are the most "comfortable" with? 

Hitashi

ps. Thank you for commenting back, its always nice to hear from the author! 


Edited by hiteat - 22 April 2013 at 2:41am

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hiteat

Originally posted by RockBarbie




Thank you so much for your comments. I kinda agree with the chick flicks and Kishore Da's songs. I don't watch chick flicks anymore and after 90s music just sucks everywhere.

Before sunrise is a personal favorite but I don't think I could have accommodated here. I do like realism in my stories but sometimes I surrender to the gods of cliche as the genre has been beaten to death its best to succumb to a known devil rather than trying to do something new in a genre I am uncomfortable with. It took a lot not to turn it into angst though the beckoning was super strong.

Thanks again!

Thank you for not going angsty (although it would have been interesting)..and you are right this story did demand a cliche. After writing this tale, I am sure you can no longer say you are uncomfortable with the genre! Moreover I cant wait to read "serendipity", although I have to say it was my least favourite movie of them all. Probably because I am the most impatient person on this planet. 

Mind if I ask you to recommend a story of yours that you are the most "comfortable" with? 

Hitashi

ps. Thank you for commenting back, its always nice to hear from the author! 
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From purely reading perspective try: Escape Velocity which is completed and Dante's labyrinth which is in progress.

Serendipity was a name suggested by a friend. Its been too long now to stick to original storyline so the name will go for a change when I update next.

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lazyleaves

I read it in one go last night (Thanks to Kalyaani for suggesting this uber cute SS to me)


Firstly, I apologize for assuming you to be a 'seriously wali' author :P

I am serious wali author :D but gave this genre which am no fan of a go anyway...just to get out of my own comfort zone...


After reading Lonely Under the Sheets, I thought that your writing is very mature and serious and I was pleasantly surprised when I opened the link to this story and what do I see? A Chick Flick?

This is the first time that I came across a chick flick as an FF. But what made me read this one the moment I saw this thread was the index. You had titled each update after famous chick flicks :)

I am not very fond of those but they are a good form of entertainment when thoroughly bored :)

But you my dear did a fab job of keeping me hooked till the end.


I have never been through a relationship or a break for that matter but the way you have shown the depressed side of Khushi was brilliant. That is what exactly a person like Khushi would do :)


Arnav on the other hand is like me :D He hasn't been in any relationships as he hasn't met THE ONE! (I have to still wait for mine *Sigh*)


Anjali and Shyam are so pokily hilarious :D They know they are irritating Arnav and Arnav is too aware of that and they both are aware of each others state of mind but still continue to do so :D


I loved their first encounter at the book store (I should start visiting bookstores soon) and how like a typical movie they didn't meet even though they were just feet apart separated by a door.


How nosy can nosy get! The Raizadas, Payal and Lavanya dropped at the store too to see Mr. Bournvita eyes and Ms. Ponds Skin :D


But what is love without separation? Some problems has to come and come it did in the form of the fire in the factory.


I was feeling bad for Khushi when he didn't turn up for 2 Saturdays in a row! I was just hoping that she gives it a third try and I am so happy that she did :D and they met and they hugged! :D


She got the last twenty minutes of movie and the happily ever after too :D


Also, I like the serious conversation these girls had about being yourself in a relationship and not pretending as that does not lead you anywhere :)


A special mention to Hasini/Lahiri for the magical and beautiful banners for each of the updates and providing you the motivation for writing it further :)


This story was simple, cute, un-complex (as complexities leads to loopholes) and you did a fab job of covering all the points at the same time keeping us entertained and yearning for more :)

*thumbs up*


Thanks a lot for writing this comment :=) Made a lovely read and I apologize for not responding earlier.

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
^No apologies please :) 

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Awesome story... Thanks to Lazyleaves for letting us know about this SS... Great work.. loved it

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:28am | IP Logged
What an absolutely splendid FF and I cant thank Kalyani enough for recommending this! I almost missed my meeting cos I was giggling hysterically sitting and reading this in the waiting room! 

And I had to comment the moment I got back and had enough time to write a comment. A lovely story that warmed my heart with its humour and simplicity

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Absolutely loved all the parts!! I just happened to stumble across this story and it had me grinning like an idioot by the end.. 

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
awesome story...I felt that I am going to meet my soul-mate very soon...

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