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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 82)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Very nice story...really enjoyed it...amazingly written. Thx to Kalyaani..she recommended it...

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Adorable story!

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
nice updt

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
loved the complete SS... I liked the end, it was very different and beautiful way to end the story Smile

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
that was a lovely story

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Bookmarking
 
Will come back to comment, when I am done reading. :)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hiteat

If all the IPK characters entered those 90s movies and met at notting hill we'd get love, inc.? That's what I figured anyway.

I have a weird obsession with 90s romcoms, just like I do with Kishore Kumar's songs..both of which are no longer created. Recreated maybe..so I was a bit apprehensive when I started reading this. But clearly you know your stuff way better than most! 
 
I love how subtle and different this story is. Yes yes it has the clichs of bumping into the hero when you are all shades of "over love + life" and just waiting for the 20mins to begin..but what follows after their meeting..was unique. The transition of gamer khushi to neat freak khushi..and yadi yada. Just by meeting once!
 
I enjoyed that there was hardly any interaction of the leads. When they met I was reminded of olden days when they meet once and they know, this is it. That's how I felt here. I loved each and every side character, I mean they make the story more than the leads.
 
Who doesn't want bournvita eyed man! The perfect perfect romcom hero if there was any, and yet we knew he wasn't in your face about his perfections..there were those subtle flaws.
 
You have the most witty sense of humour and I love that its not just about love, but life..the way the characters discuss things..realistic and yet fresh. No ghise-pite dialogues. I got insight to so many things..about human behavior in merely 8 chapters.
 
I was scared if they would meet in the end..or if it would end up like before sunrise (fav. out of the whole list..its not even on the list!)? But then it was "love actually". And I like that you kept it easy..no grand gestures or promises or pressures.
 
Probably analysed way more than required. Anywho just wanted to say please count me in as reader if you ever start a rom-com type fiction again! And thank you for writing and sharing this one :)
 
Hitashi


Thank you so much for your comments. I kinda agree with the chick flicks and Kishore Da's songs. I don't watch chick flicks anymore and after 90s music just sucks everywhere.

Before sunrise is a personal favorite but I don't think I could have accommodated here. I do like realism in my stories but sometimes I surrender to the gods of cliche as the genre has been beaten to death its best to succumb to a known devil rather than trying to do something new in a genre I am uncomfortable with. It took a lot not to turn it into angst though the beckoning was super strong.

Thanks again!

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