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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 80)

__blossom__ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Read all the parts in one go..!
And this was frigging awsome!!!!
Loved it!

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LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 April 2012
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 9:31pm | IP Logged

If all the IPK characters entered those 90s movies and met at notting hill we'd get love, inc.? That's what I figured anyway.

I have a weird obsession with 90s romcoms, just like I do with Kishore Kumar's songs..both of which are no longer created. Recreated I was a bit apprehensive when I started reading this. But clearly you know your stuff way better than most! 
I love how subtle and different this story is. Yes yes it has the clichs of bumping into the hero when you are all shades of "over love + life" and just waiting for the 20mins to begin..but what follows after their meeting..was unique. The transition of gamer khushi to neat freak khushi..and yadi yada. Just by meeting once!
I enjoyed that there was hardly any interaction of the leads. When they met I was reminded of olden days when they meet once and they know, this is it. That's how I felt here. I loved each and every side character, I mean they make the story more than the leads.
Who doesn't want bournvita eyed man! The perfect perfect romcom hero if there was any, and yet we knew he wasn't in your face about his perfections..there were those subtle flaws.
You have the most witty sense of humour and I love that its not just about love, but life..the way the characters discuss things..realistic and yet fresh. No ghise-pite dialogues. I got insight to so many things..about human behavior in merely 8 chapters.
I was scared if they would meet in the end..or if it would end up like before sunrise (fav. out of the whole list..its not even on the list!)? But then it was "love actually". And I like that you kept it grand gestures or promises or pressures.
Probably analysed way more than required. Anywho just wanted to say please count me in as reader if you ever start a rom-com type fiction again! And thank you for writing and sharing this one :)

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Joined: 27 October 2012
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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
it was jst fabs...

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lazyleaves IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 13 March 2012
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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
I read it in one go last night (Thanks to Kalyaani for suggesting this uber cute SS to me)

Firstly, I apologize for assuming you to be a 'seriously wali' author :P

After reading Lonely Under the Sheets, I thought that your writing is very mature and serious and I was pleasantly surprised when I opened the link to this story and what do I see? A Chick Flick?

This is the first time that I came across a chick flick as an FF. But what made me read this one the moment I saw this thread was the index. You had titled each update after famous chick flicks :)

I am not very fond of those but they are a good form of entertainment when thoroughly bored :)

But you my dear did a fab job of keeping me hooked till the end.

I have never been through a relationship or a break for that matter but the way you have shown the depressed side of Khushi was brilliant. That is what exactly a person like Khushi would do :)

Arnav on the other hand is like me :D He hasn't been in any relationships as he hasn't met THE ONE! (I have to still wait for mine *Sigh*)

Anjali and Shyam are so pokily hilarious :D They know they are irritating Arnav and Arnav is too aware of that and they both are aware of each others state of mind but still continue to do so :D

I loved their first encounter at the book store (I should start visiting bookstores soon) and how like a typical movie they didn't meet even though they were just feet apart separated by a door.

How nosy can nosy get! The Raizadas, Payal and Lavanya dropped at the store too to see Mr. Bournvita eyes and Ms. Ponds Skin :D

But what is love without separation? Some problems has to come and come it did in the form of the fire in the factory.

I was feeling bad for Khushi when he didn't turn up for 2 Saturdays in a row! I was just hoping that she gives it a third try and I am so happy that she did :D and they met and they hugged! :D

She got the last twenty minutes of movie and the happily ever after too :D

Also, I like the serious conversation these girls had about being yourself in a relationship and not pretending as that does not lead you anywhere :)

A special mention to Hasini/Lahiri for the magical and beautiful banners for each of the updates and providing you the motivation for writing it further :)

This story was simple, cute, un-complex (as complexities leads to loopholes) and you did a fab job of covering all the points at the same time keeping us entertained and yearning for more :)

*thumbs up*
lazyleaves IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
I forgot to mention that I loved the title and the banner and I am planning to read Escape Velocity and Gravity (suggested by Kalyaani :) ) and Vertigo (suggested by Rasgulla_sp :) )

Thank you so much :)

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Perspectives. Goldie

Joined: 08 March 2010
Posts: 1209

Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
You couldn't have ended it more subtely, RB.
Absolutely heart-warming to read and the end just made my heart sigh!
Love Inc. was a delight to read. Hope to read more from you!

Edited by deereyedgal504 - 19 April 2013 at 7:29am

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soppy Senior Member

Joined: 28 May 2012
Posts: 505

Posted: 19 April 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Hey!...i love your story!
You are an amazing writer!
Please pm me for future stories!

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Aparamegha IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2911

Posted: 19 April 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Read all the chapters in one was a big pleasure to come across your writing style...absolute fabClap

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