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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Oh dear...she brought her laptop to the loo? ROFL

Khushi has to learn to stop changing herself for the men in her life; perhaps '5 o'clock shadow and Bournvita eyes' will appreciate her for who she really is? LOL

You are an amazing writer that's all I can say: we've had politics, the dynamics of an 'unequal marriage', romance and despair, a thriller and now a lighthearted journey of Khushi as a star of her own 90's chick flick-type story. Clap


Edited by moomin4455 - 07 April 2013 at 12:06pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
ah.. this one is all chick-flick to balance escape velocity... ehehhehe nice nice

whatever u write- i am in to read and comment away... 

the most hilarious part was when she says Payal had to box her ears for taking the laptop to the loo. I have to learn that.  :D gaming can be addictive I hear although have not tried it myself. 

totally get the changing yourself to suit the guy you are dating part!! lol.. 

nice one RB! waiting for the story to unfold with the Bournvita guy ;)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Lots of experimentation going on I see...

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Great start. Whatever you write is fab so looking forward to this.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Exact color of bournvita!!!luvd the way u describe!
Interesting

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Chick Flick? - You are kidding me right?Embarrassed

So you give us WTP, Gravity, Escape Velocity and then Love Inc. I am not doubting your talent to write different genres but just amazed at with your ability to handle multiple emotions and depths at the same time. BRILLIANT!!Clap 

I am sucker for chick flicks... Day Dreaming

After the intricate and convoluted journey(in a good way) you taking our brains on with "Escape Velocity, Love. Inc is like a breather!! Approve

Since its a chick flick my comments will be in PINKWink


Edited by Prakal - 07 April 2013 at 2:47pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
this was one very nice sunday surprise and thank u so much for it!

u never cease to amaze me with ur talent of writting anything and turning it into something splendid! how in the world do u manage to write two different concept (im meaning the other ff) and still manage to rock them both! lol guess u r absolutely at muktiwritting:)

loving this new story and u deserve all the congratulations for this awesome first chapter!

looking forward to ur next update:)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Wow a new story from you can't wait to read it further, a brilliant and awesome start. Very different but mind blowing concept and we are in for a treat with a chick flick. Poor Khushi has been playing on the console and taking the laptop into the loo, awesome and if I'm not wrong the online game she is playing is from that brilliant show "the Big Bang theory". So Khushi has met Arnav at the bookstore, her first reaction was "bloody hell", please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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