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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] (Page 55)

manikka IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:54am | IP Logged
superb part dear...

next meet ka chance bhi mil gya...

thnks for the PM...

continue soon...

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greenMoss Senior Member
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:02am | IP Logged
R.
Edited.

This was such a wonderful update.. I just loved it.

The first few paragraphs that showed the intensity of Khushi's grief over all the failed relationships. The description was heart-breakingly poignant.

Payal and Lavanya, though very nosy, are helpful. I just hope that they have a better insight into her pain.

There was obviously humour in the facts that Khushi's nosy friends and Arnav's meddling family , came to the bookstore to "keep an eye" over them.ROFL

I was so, so Happy when Arnav said to Khushi that the woman with him is his sister.

There is a feel-good factor to it , where they decided to go to that underground Library and ran hand in hand and then went for a coffee.

One major doubt here-
Arnav doesn't know the name of Khushi. He only addresses her as the "Lara Croft" Girl. Then how come he called Khushi by her name and then said that he felt like calling her name, in that underground bookshop?
Khushi obviously missed noticing it..

I just loved that line where you said that Arnav joined to Khushi's laughter after a heart-beat later.

Thanks for the PM.
Smile


Edited by greenMoss - 15 April 2013 at 4:49am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Hey!
 
Thanks for the PM.
 
Well-written.
 
Descriptive.
 
Its funny how Khushi is getting a little bit of grief from La and Payal, then we have Arnav and he too is getting the same kind of treatment courtsey to his brother-in-law, sister and cousin. Bless them.
 
Its kinda adorable ... a little romantic even when Arnav and Khushi take their leave from the library ... together ... hand in hand ... and feel sooo comfortable around one another. Beautiful. Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Poor Khushi but I had big smile on my face in the end just like Arnav and Khushi!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Wow..Thanks RB and HassiniHug

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SS88 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Lovely update, it did start out in the same vein as Before Sunset, but I like that you ended it on such a positive note. I'm smiling like an idiot and feeling a little giddy myself. Escaping siblings and pesky friends aint no mean feat- well done Arnie and Khushi. Bookstore dates, followed by coffee dates. And a promise of more dates to come- RB you've made my day( or evening) Can't wait for more.
Thank you Hasini- if not for your help, we wouldn't get this lovely chapter. Please keep encouraging RB :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
finally they meet

thankfully lavanya didnt see

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Brilliant and beautiful update, awww this story is just so sweet and adorable. It was so nice when they met again in the bookstore and they ran away from Arnav's family and khushi's friends that was brilliant. Poor Arnav forgot his wallet and was so embarrassed, but on a good note they have planned another date, superb. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM and to Hasini for helping you to continue writing this mind blowing story. 

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