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ArHi SS! Love, Inc. [Completed] - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this was amazing. So simple, so beautiful... I just loved it😊
This can actually be made into a movie u know. Would love to read your other works. Do u have an index to it all by any chance? Plz pm me😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey, reading ur story twice already :)

the end is simple u said and i understand ur logic for it but wud've loved to see a few of the loops closed...

like Anjali meeting her miss ponds skin...

and La realizing that Mr. Bournvita Eyes is none other then Arnav who loved Khushi's cooking...

maybe a simple short and sweet epilogue...what say, is it possible ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bookmarking for now. Will be back with a comment as and when I read it .
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was just awesome!! 
I loved the characters and their you chose in this SS... an i loved the thoughts that you shared as Khushi's dialogues .. it so made sense!! 
Beautiful! i feel content after reading it! 

And i thank Kalyani for navigating me here!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: anjs

hey, reading ur story twice already :)


the end is simple u said and i understand ur logic for it but wud've loved to see a few of the loops closed...

like Anjali meeting her miss ponds skin...

and La realizing that Mr. Bournvita Eyes is none other then Arnav who loved Khushi's cooking...

maybe a simple short and sweet epilogue...what say, is it possible ?



Sorry, I don't think I will be writing an epilogue. The rest of the things are implied and will be explained to their friends in due time...after all, its a matter of time, isn't it?

Thanks for your comment..

RB
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful story. Loved it.  Thanks !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg this was aweskme dear very very nice

Fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have read this story in one go...wonderful plot...wonderful ending...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
                                                 ...PERFECT...

That's all I can say...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
What do you call the bridge between the sofa and coffee table with your legs crossed on the cofee table. RELAX!!!! Than is a gift when you watch a chick flicks. If I  get a continous chick flick of my favourites with my favorite couple is like a comforter on the bridge with a ice cream tub on my tummy.
 
When she was Single, she went to have Breakfast at Tiffany, there she saw her Jerry Mg Guirre entering with her favorite ...She was like When Harry met Sally. All these happened after thier Sleepless night in Seatle. Both mind were thinking what happened during the sleepless night and about the cristmas shopping of Serendipity, recognising and suprised both came to know that Love Actually blossmed between them, let me give to your imaginations what happend Before the sunset and After the sunset.
 
Thanks Lazyleaves for recommending this Love Inc., it really ficked this chick.