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_Annesha_ IF-Rockerz

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Royalty was felt in every part of Devgarh ,it was the most powerful kingdom of its time,the kingdom was filled with wealth and culture ,it was named golden bird of Ghotaru a magical land  ,and the royals ,the king and queen were the main attraction of this place ,the kings were brave rajpoot fighter who posses magical powers  and the queens were pearl of nature ,no king could ever dare to even think of fighting them ,there power had no match ,only the royal blood  had magical power as to such that they could even turn a dead flower into bird there was only one kingdom which could match its power ,Jaigarh but luck had planned something else Devgarh and Jaigarh royals were the bestest of friends they fought against each evil with there magical power and defeated any hurdle on there way   ,but like everything this golden merry time also came to an end when after the death of Maharaje Randeer Kumar Singh ,the throne was handed over to his widower Rajmata Mrinalini Devi ,thing changed drastically she announced at her crown ceremony that her powers and thrones would be handed over to the first grandchild of her daughter that was Manyata ,every body applaused and cheered as the little 13 year old princess was the most loved among everybody she was the daughter of Komal the daughter of Mrinalini and Avendra the king of Rajkoot but after his death Komal was remarried to Bridgraaj Singh a commoner ,manyata was only 1 when her mother got remarried even after so much of opposition Komal was firm on her decision ,Mrinalini could never forgive her daughter so she dethroned Komal and her new husband from Devgarh but kept manyata with her as in any condition she did not want anything to harm manyata ,she had always been a cute ,sweet ,soft spoken and shy girl she was never frank to anyone except for the little 15 year old prince of Jaigarh uday veer both found immense pleasure in each other 's company as uday veer did not have a mother and his father Giriraaj Veer Singh was too busy along with Mrinalini Devi for royal duties by seeing there friendship but soon this friendship turned into love and this was noticed by the royals so  it was decided that in future they would tie a knot so on the crown ceremony it was decided that they would get this two kids engaged ,manyata was aware and had no objection as she was getting engaged to her love  but uday had always been more mature than his age he perfectly knew and had always imagined manyata as his wife and they were engagaed on his 5th birthday and ten years after that they fixed there marriage ,finally the day came devgarh palace was decorated like a bride with flowers and lights as fire crakers as fire crakers brusted in the evening sky manyata was in a red gaggra embroded with gold and ruby and a white blouse with pearl in it and her hair was tied in an elegant bun with flower and rubies in it as golden jewels filled in her body ,she was almost ready all she needed was the red netted cholli to cover her head just then she felt a shiver ran down her body ,a thick muscular hands had taked her tander soft body in its embrace as its cold hard lips pressed against her soft bare white neck she closed her eyes and whispered
MANYATA: yuvraaj uday veer singh kya app thora sa bhi intizaar nahi kar saktei [yuvraaj uday veer singh can't you wait even a little]
UDAY:apkoh paata nahi rajkumari manyata ki hum apna aappa koh lete hai jaab hum apkoh dekte hai [don't you know princess manyata i loose control over myself when i see you]
saying this he sank his teeth in her soft neck she closed her eyes as a lone drop of tears fell off her check due to the pain he caused her but she did not complain she did not want to disturb him while he enjoyed and dug it even more but now the pain was immense as she mummered
MANYATA;yuvraaj bash kijiye humei dard horaha hai [yuvraaj stop it i am in pain]
UDAY;yuvraaj uday veer singh ki patnii bane jarahi hoi toh etna dard toh sehena hi parega  [you are going to be yuvraaj uday veer singh wife you have to suffer at least this much]
now his attention moved towards her cleavage he turned her now she was facing him as he pulled her blouse a litlle lower exposing her cleavage he ran his tongue wildly through her breast making her weak on her knees as she breathed heavily ,she had already started to get all wet by his touch as he sank his teeths again ,she holded her breath back and after sometime said
MANYATA;appkoh janna chahiye saabh logg apka entizaar kar rahe honge[you should go people are waiting for you]
uday finally seperated his teeth from her skin and whispered in her ears
UDAY;bash aur kuch hiii der ki baath hai uskei baadh hum dono hamesha hamesha ke liye ek hojayenge [only few more hours after that no one can stop us from being one]
saying this he placed a kiss on her lips which was more like a peck and within a blink of eye vanished from the sight that was udya 's favorite magical trick ,he went and sat in the mandaap acting as though he had been here ,time flew with every passing hour his heart beat grew faster and faster finally the holy hour came as the rajpurohit announced
RAJPUROHIT;rajkumari manyata koi bulaya jai[call rajkumari manyata]
just then a servant came running and shouting
SERVANT;RAJKUMARI MANYATA APNEI KAMRE MEI ANHI HAI KISSI NEI UNKA APAHARAN KAR LIYA HAI[ princess manyata is not in her room someone kidnapped her]
the words rang in uday 's year as he clunced tighter  to his sword causing his hands to bleed ,he holds back his tears and crushing his teeths he say
"Nahi app himei chorke nahi jaa sakte hai kabhi nahi app humari hai sirf yuvraaj uday veer singh ki"

this was the prologue
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chapter 1 page 1

Edited by annesha18 - 08 April 2013 at 7:49am

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_Annesha_ IF-Rockerz

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character sketch
Yuvraaj uday veer singh
age :25

a tall,dark, handsome prince of Jaigarh posses a royal magical power the only heir to the Jaigarh throne ,always have girls and princess drolling over him nature seems to shower all love and luck on him but this was just an illussion of the people in reality he his heart had been frozen since his marriage day ten years before when his fiance was kidnapped he indulged himself in riasaat work as on the day of his marriage the queen of Devgarh ,mrinalini devi was murdered and his father took charges over the Devgarh riasaat but luck was still not faithful to this little young price at the age of 20 he lost his only family member ,he lost his father too in a plague that attacked the country his father weak bone could not fight it and took his last breath now everything was in uday responsibilty never a prince had been so gloomy and melenchonic in life but sun did shone in his life love did come back to his life when he finally captured her kidnapper and got the news that she was in human world in a place called Mumbai without even giving it a second thought he packed his bags to set a journey to get his love back and handed the responsibility of the kingdom to the most wise person of the kingdom named Guru Aritra  ,to get his fiance back ,to get the smile in his face back
arvind kumar singh
age 24

the son of komal and bridgraaj ,he does not pocese any kind of royal magical power as he was the son of bridgraaj first wife and is a commoner they were exiled from Devgarh and bridgraaj who married komal only for throne was furious after knowing so he murdered komal and planned revenge so on the day of manyata marriage he kidnapped manyata and killed mrinalini devi ,he wanted to destroy manyata life in which eh is actually succeding now manyata stays with them in mumbai unaware of her reality as first they tried to poison her but it did not work and she just lost her memory .arvind is very cruel with bad motives
manyata singh
age 23

a cute ,quite ,rebellious girl stay in chawl with her brother and dad all she knows was she is there daughter and her mother died while giving birth to her she has no idea about her powers she is treated  very cruely by her father and brother beaten up ocassionaly she ahs not even been to school or college she is set to work in a mall as a cleaner ,her life is miserable
happy, spunky girl. She has been brought up by her father, bridgraaj and her brother arvind . Being a regular drunker they cannot fiance the home . He has conditioned her to believe that she is better than her current situation and she is a cruse on them .  she is more beautiful more intelligent, more graceful and more deserving . manyata  a confident person, and such harsh behaviour by her family ahs made her  she is  arrogant or rude, but she does have a slightly superior view and it makes her a natural leader. She is friendly, with a skill of making friends quickly, since all her life she has moved to new places and has learnt to adapt.after so many thing she is stil very committed to her family and do anything it takes to keep them happy she places there happiness before her she has never been in love as she has always seen a five year old pricy guy in her dream and she is waiting for him... . 

Edited by annesha18 - 07 April 2013 at 10:07am

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_Annesha_ IF-Rockerz

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Mumbai ,the city of dreams ,it is a place where stars do come on ground ,a dwelling heaven for people being a metro political city it has all the facility but this facility do have a high cost  ,hardwork is needed to fulfil one dream in Mumbai there are huge sky scrapers but there are chawl too ,who would have ever imagined a princess with so much of knowledge and power leading her life like that unaware of who she really is or what power she possess ,It was her 23rd birthday with the first ray of light her eyes were wide open she strenched herself on the pyol like every other night of the year neither her father nor her brother returned home ,she clearly knew they were in some bar spending the money she earned with all hard work on alcohols  but she did not complain she could not complain as they were the only relative she had so to stay secure in this world she needed him ,without giving anything a futher thought she got into her grey and white uniform which she had been wearing  for 5 years now ,she worked in a shopping mall her heart ached every time she saw a perfect family or rich kids spending there money uselessly although she was poor yet she was honest and had strong virtue like every day she set her journey to a better future she took a local double decker bus as usual she did not get a seat and had to stand in spite finally after a journey of 2 hours she reached the mall it had no opened yet so she went from the back door which was meant for staff ,she went she saw her friends chiki and soni was already there as she took her duster and started to wipe the ground floor suddenly chiki came to her and said
CHIKI;aapna haat khol [open your hands]
MANYATA:kyui kya hua haat waat katke bhechne ka toh plan nahi hai nai [why what happened don't tell me you will cut my hand and sell]
SONI;uff tui bhi nah meri crime perot queen chup chaap haat khol [uff you also no my crime petrol queen now just open your hands]
without another word she opened her hands as they placed a small diary milk chocolate in her hands there was a smile on there face as they said
At this manyata burst in laughter and said
MANYATA:Woa happy birthday hai [thats happy brithday]
CHIKI;haah abh joh bhi hoi acha humlogo koh angrezzi ka e bhi nahi aatta toh tuji etni achi bilkul bideshio ke tara bolna kaisee aata [ we do not even know basic of english then how come you are so good in english]
MANYATA:paata nahi sayeeed kisi zamanei mei meri sapno wala rajkumar mujei sikhaya hoga [do not know maybe in some decade the prince of my dreams taught me ]
the trio shared  a laugh and got back to there work as they do not get payed to enjoy it was indeed a very tiring day for manyata and after work she was making her way back to her chawl suprisingly the lanes which used to be filled with colours and lights was dull and dark today it was almost impossible for her to make her way through the darkness at last luck left her and she slipped over something she almost fell but a strong arm encircled around her waist giving her a familiar ,pleasurable feeling all she could see was the eyes ,drak brown chocolate eyes with so much of love and passion in it as he spoke in a husky voice
UDAY:happy birthday PRINCESS
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MANYATA:kish haq sei tune mujei chuya koi haq nahi hai tuje mere upar kyui barbar mere kareeb araha hai
UDAY;abhi taak toh humnei apna haq jatana suru bhi nahi kia believe me princess once i start even the nature won't be able to stop me from showing my rights on you

Edited by annesha18 - 08 April 2013 at 7:51am

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
res will edit soon

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arna753 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
nice concept aneesha. 

waiting for the first chapter.

cont soon thanks for the pm...

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huma12. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
hiii annniii

one more ss wowww

love the prolougeee

cherecter skecth was awsssmmm

love the chappyyy

thanksss 4 pm

love u janiii muuuaaahhh

Edited by huma12. - 08 April 2013 at 7:57am

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_Annesha_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arna753

nice concept aneesha. 

waiting for the first chapter.

cont soon thanks for the pm...

i am glad you liked it
character sketch is posted
and for this i will give regular updates

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safia25 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Great concept!! Wanna read more.. Do update soon

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