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Finding Love #4: COMPLETED (Page 97)

srishti_jain Senior Member

Joined: 23 December 2012
Posts: 755

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Wonderful, wonderful update! I love this story! Every romantic moment between Arnav and Khushi is so enchanting! Our dear Arnav is way too possessive of his Khushi! I loved that whole description where you wrote about his feelings and how he just wanted it to end, how he couldn't bear to see Khushi with someone else and how he couldn't concentrate on anything else! The part where you wrote that he could breathe properly after the dance ended was too cute! He was so jealous and I'm sure at that moment he could even kill Rohan for dancing with his Khushi! I loved that part, it only portrays how deeply he loves her! And then started their small tiff, they really are a rare and an unparalleled couple, they have to have a fight, no matter what! One moment they are kissing each other and expressing their feelings and the very next moment they start teasing each other! How cute and adorable are they! I knew that even Khushi wanted to dance with Arnav! I loved that part where Arnav warned Rohan to stay away from Khushi and told him to call her Bhabhi! That was so sweet! Arnav surely wants to tell everybody to leave his Khushi for him and him only! 
I'm still wondering what was the discussion that took place between Shashi, Amar and Arnav! I'm curious about that but I'll have to wait for that! 
Khushi how sweetly realised that she shouldn't have forced Arnav to dance, that's the beauty of it, they fight, and then realisation dawns in! And then the first thing they need to do is see each other, I can't tell you how wonderful I feel after reading such things! I also loved the part where Khushi lied to her father that she had had her dinner just because she wanted to have dinner with Arnav! 
And then came the most beautiful part! All I could do reading all that was "Awww"! How deeply can one love someone and how one can go to any extent in order to make your loved one happy! Seriously these two define love! At one point Khushi was worried about forcing Arnav and at that very moment Arnav was planning a surprise for Khushi so that he could fulfil her wish! I had goosebumps while reading that part! Wonderful! 
Please update soon! Thank you for the PM! You are fantastic! Smile Smile

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Amiarisme Goldie

Joined: 13 November 2012
Posts: 1886

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
is it khushi's father?
the things tht love makes arna singh raizada do (sigh)
awesome update

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Chokri_ASR IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 September 2012
Posts: 7722

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
awww he is so romantic...your story definitely has the most romantic Arnav.  Loved this update.
hummm wondering what the men discussed and who the heck is watching?????   These cliffhangers always makes me anxious till your next update...guess have to wait :(

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aarrsshhii IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 May 2012
Posts: 3772

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
oooh...whos eyes are those?? is it going to be a good or bad thing now... am scared...i hope nothing bad happens now... hmmm danced with her... oooh...beautiful...
they are sooo cute together...
and the suspense has been lurking around the corner fr some time now... whats cooking btween shashi , arnav and his dad...??
update sson...

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AdiZoya Goldie

Joined: 30 December 2011
Posts: 2056

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged

Another magical updateDay Dreaming It was amazingStar

It was really fun to see Arnav burning from inside due to jealousy. He actually hates his cousin brother so much, because he danced with Khushi and because he made small talk with Khushi. Wonder how he managed to control his anger without lashing out.

I loved when Arnav considered Khushi as a firecracker. I really would love to see these two in reality.

When Sheetal came near Arnav, I thought Arnav would dance with Sheetal to make Khushi jealous. But he actually was mature enough to act like a gentleman. This is why I love your Arnav so much.

I loved it when Arnav gave a peace of mind to Rohan, without making a big scene at a special occasion like this.

The last part was the most wonderful part of the update. I am so in love with Arnav. How thoughtful of him. He actually did everything, because he wanted to make every wish of Khushi come true. Love you loadzzz ArnavHeart

Loved the update to the coreHug

Thanks for the pmBig smile

Waiting eagerly for 25thWink

Edited by V3Od - 23 April 2013 at 9:02am

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 21 April 2006
Posts: 29208

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
brilliant update loved the jealous arnav loved how he told rohan to call her babhi so cute hoping her spoke to her dad about them and who was watching them when they were at the pool hope this person won't cause trouble awesome update beautifully done

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star_fan1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 March 2012
Posts: 9140

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
awesome update
for love Arnav had do everything that he hadn't do till now
waiting for next update

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Simran.22 Senior Member

Joined: 10 November 2012
Posts: 651

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
loved the update!
their private dance was amazing!
now who was looking them?
whats cooking between arnav amar and shashi?
too many questions! 
please continue soon!

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