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Finding Love #4: COMPLETED (Page 85)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
"I was just not happy with the way this chapter was shaping up. I'm not exactly satisfied with it still but I didn't want to keep you guys waiting any longer."


I don't know why you would be unhappy about this chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Your writing just keeps getting better with time and each subsequent chapter, and this chapter was no exception.

Keep writing beautifully, the way you do already!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter and wondering when you would be updating it :)

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
wondrful update. Lovd it. Arnav is possesive. Both missd each othr lyk hell. Beautifuly written. Waitng 2 knw abt arnav shashi convrstn. Shashi agreed wid arnav, bt y was he indiffrnt.
Ps- oly pm me if i dod comment aftr 2 days of ur update.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Omg this update was epic! I 

loved how you worded everything, I could hear them saying it in my head. 

I loved the outfits you chose for them, I just completed the decorations that you selected.

I love how Khushi was getting irritated by not seeing Arnav and I also love how Arnav was getting jealous near the end LOL

Love the update! Can't wait fir the next one! Please don't take this long!!!

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insyvinsy Senior Member
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
lol a possessive arnav Wink

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
o.O Why is Babuji mad? Is it because he's figured out that there is something cooking between the two good looking?
And he's disappointed that Khushi didn't tell him herself?

OHHH! I sense something burning. Watch out insignificant-cousin, you do NOT want to mess around with ASR-ki-Khushi.

I wonder if we've seen the last of Lavanya... random I know... but it suddenly struck me today!

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Harshi.IPK Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Superb update...

Shadi ke rasme..in line..i'm sure they are gonna be awesome aswell...

Will be waiting...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Oh... What secret r khushi's father and arnav sharing????

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
awesome update
arnav made shashi gupta agreed
now they are going together
sangeet theme is great
and arnav made them color coordinate
lovely


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