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Finding Love #4: COMPLETED (Page 108)

Chochoo83 Goldie

Joined: 28 May 2012
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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
wonderfull update...
wondering what sahshi n aranv dad talked with arnav????
aww lik jealous aranv LOL
he such a sweatheart he did all the arrangement to dance with khushi aaawww
but who is watching them isit lavnaya????
continue soon
thanks for pm

Edited by yashal_khan - 22 April 2013 at 7:53am

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Nidsubh007 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 May 2011
Posts: 10215

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Shobhu21-

ch23 :

Wowwiee ! That was an amazing update Nidhi !

OK, my fav part has to be about the perfect male species ! And the fact that Khushi didnt faint there and then was suprising ! Cause like she said, when just Arnav in clothes makes my heart tap dance, an Arnav with towel, had my heart doing tango in full speed !

And the kiss they share afterwards, inspite of the heat between them, it was so tender, it makes me float ! And yippee, I knew they'd be colour co-ordinated ! Trust Arnav to get Khushi used to being a couple :D

But just one nagging worrying part, is about Khushi's dad. Why has he been giving her "the look"  ??
And must say, amazing setup you've found for the sangeet ! It looks so splendid !

Thanks for the mail !
Love Shobhana

PS: sorry for missing so long, had exams !

I hadnt realised id get to the nedxt pg ! Yipee ! so res for 24 too !

I really need to tell you this, before anything else you make me fall in love with arnav and Khushi over and over again deeper than before !
As for this update, I simply love it ! An overprotective jealous Arnav is fun to watch and read ! But still, the thing about Shashi giving Khushi the looks is nagging in my brain !

And the part were my eyes popped out, has to be where Arnav asks Rohan to call Khushi bhabhi ! I was so shocked, I though Id probably misread it, and read it two times, pinched myself and finally I was just in awe of the way you made Arnav say that ! Loved it, it was just something so spontaneous of your Arnav to do !

And the end ! The locatio of the pool and the ambience you'd wanted us to visualise was done so well ! I loved that picture ! And finally, Arnav did fulfil her wish, cause somewhere deep down I was sure he would ! And the song you'd selected it ! I love it !
Also a spl mention to Khushi over here, the maturity she displays once she realises that maybe she's just demanding a tad bit too much from him and goes around looking for him was just an amazing scene too !

An amazing update yet again Nidhi ! Loved it !

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! Every single person who comments on the thread really makes this story special for me, the effort is so worth it!

I know everyone is quite anxious regarding the mysteries behind Shashi, Arnav and now Amar conversations, I promise all will be revealed soon!

I'm glad I was able to create a little bit of the magic that Khushi and Arnav are, I really debated over which song to use at the end, but this song just defines them for me.

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ameena671 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
wow nice update loved it thank you.

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Vidhi_K Goldie

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:20am | IP Logged
The last bit was beautiful.  He really loves her and will do anything for her.  But who was watching them?  Looking forward to the next update.

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InfectWithLove Groupbie

Joined: 16 April 2013
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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
amazing Thumbs Up

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
nice move Arnav.. good one.. waiting to c who witnessed it..

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gifttag IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 February 2012
Posts: 2651

Posted: 22 April 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Wonderful update.
To witness a possessive Arnav is a always a treat.
Awwwe he decorated pool side for their dance, how romantic.
What was cooking between the two dads and Arnav?
Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks for the PM.

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A_BA IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Arnav is just too romantic, with the set up for the dance. He is not willing to look like a fool in front of others with his dancing, but he's willing to let her see his weaknessSmile. Also, love how possessive he was in regards to his cousin. Some may call it too much, but it just shows how much he cares. Loved the Bhabi line!

So what went on in the study between the three men?? Hopefully we find out soon enough...but Arnav said something like the things he has to do for Khushi! Can't wait to find out!

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