First of all, congratulations on a new thread! Wonderful chapter! I was waiting for your update since the morning! I loved this particular update simply because both of them poured out their feelings for each other! Their love is so pure and beautiful! I loved the beginning, Arnav not wanting to let go off Khushi and both of them just holding onto to each other like they are each other's lifelines! I can't imagine how bad Arnav must have felt looking at a happy Khushi who was so excited about Harvard and had no realisation about the aftermath of her going to Harvard! Poor guy, he had such a long day, an unwanted encounter with Lavanya, work stress and what not and he wanted to hide this from Khushi so that their evening doesn't get spoiled! I loved the part where Khushi was talking and Arnav just kept on looking at her and just her presence made him feel relaxed and at peace! Beautifully written part! I loved that part where you described about their gardening habits and roses! Lovely! Also, I loved the part where you wrote about the fact that how a part of Khushi always had been connected to Arnav without her realising it! And their dance, the song and that whole ambiance was so perfect! Their kiss, it just stirred a lot of emotions, I loved how you described it! I could actually feel the intensity of their love! I love how they understand each other so well and get to know if somethings is right or wrong even without any verbal mention! The end bit was very sad. I actually felt like crying, how both of them want to sacrifice their happiness for each other! Love is indeed selfless! And the end was amazing, I love you dammit made an appearance! Wonderful, wonderful work! Fantastic update! Please update soon! I'm waiting for the next part! Thank you for the mail! 😊😊
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