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IPK 2 - It Happened This Way ... part 7 pg 18 (Page 12)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 7:50am | IP Logged
It looks like its going to be the other way...Shyam is out, Khushi stays with the support of the family members...hopefully!

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Diya, please don't make Khushi leave Arnav...make Shyaam rot in hell...please Diya...pretty please?

Thanks so much for the PM.

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
There were so many places in the update which left with a lump in my throat that refuse to leave.

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 8:47am | IP Logged
I was in a different world all together while reading the update. It was absolutely brilliant. I felt like I was sitting in a corner of their bed and the scene was playing out in front of my eyes. Superb. Update the next part soon

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant update Diya Clap...loved it Hug

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
brought back every single feeling i had when i was besotted with the show... big fat tears are trembling on my lashes..  brilliant !


(p.s. eager to read more!)
will come back after i compose myself


Edited by pink.lotus - 26 April 2013 at 12:15pm

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Awesome Diya!!!!!!

I loved it...The way you blended the happenings on the show with your own story has brought  a heady mix of intensity and emotion that the show didn't have after the kidnapping track...
This is exactly what I wanted...Khushi to leave him when the 6 months ended...

Arnav felt as though the bottom had just dropped out of his world. This was the one thing he had most feared would happen
Thats exactly what he deserves...He never told her the reason for the marriage, never heard her side of things and didn't even try to find out if her version of Shyam's truth is the real truth. He deserves to pine for the woman he loves and wallow in repentance and guilt over what he out her through and his heartlessness...

There's so much feeling and emotion in your writing, its like I can actually feel what arnav and khushi are feeling as they speak! I'm really really looking forward to the next part!
Just one tiny thing though...I wonder why she was looking for arnavLOLLOL
and I came to find you. What are you doing with NK?"

Thanks for the PMSmile
Please please please please please please!!!!! Update Sooon!!!

 Can't wait
...


Edited by serendipitylove - 26 April 2013 at 12:32pm

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
 Yes, yes, tie up those loose ends ...every little straggly bit that was left flapping away in the wind...and bring us some peace ...I know , too dramatic LOL But seriously wanna go and bang a few heads together right now ...so much was left unsaid , so much unexplored ...

Nicely done Diya . Would love to see her leave him and be wooed back , slowly .

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