IPK 2 - It Happened This Way ... part 7 pg 18 - Page 10

 Yes, yes, tie up those loose ends ...every little straggly bit that was left flapping away in the wind...and bring us some peace ...I know , too dramatic 😆 But seriously wanna go and bang a few heads together right now ...so much was left unsaid , so much unexplored ...

I Really Hope She Leaves Him For Some Time!

This story turning out to be better and better with each update. Very well-written, D!

It is good to see ASR having to eat humble pie in the words of truth that his wife has told him, the truth that he had refused to believe all these days, the very same wife who has nearly died to save him. Wonder what he is going to now.

Am waiting eagerly for the next update.

Diya,

Love this! Cannot wait to see what happens next. I, for one, would be happy to see Kushi leave with Arnav trying to win her back! Would love the push-pull between Arnav and ASR...

Am excited to read your take on the storyline. Am eagerly awaiting your update!

Can't wait for next part😊

The journey to hold on to her now begins. Loved the update.

I just so loved reading this. Can you PM me the next part please? Do update soon!!Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago

Wonderful Dia.. This bring us to ask.. WWAD to stop Khushi.. I am assuming Amezing builders aren't going to make an appearance 😉

Originally posted by: Moksha51

Wonderful Dia.. This bring us to ask.. WWAD to stop Khushi.. I am assuming Amezing builders aren't going to make an appearance 😉

I have amnesia about certain events that happened in IPK 🤣 Does that answer your kwostin?

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Awesome Diya!!!!!!

I loved it...The way you blended the happenings on the show with your own story has brought  a heady mix of intensity and emotion that the show didn't have after the kidnapping track...
This is exactly what I wanted...Khushi to leave him when the 6 months ended...

Arnav felt as though the bottom had just dropped out of his world. This was the one thing he had most feared would happen
Thats exactly what he deserves...He never told her the reason for the marriage, never heard her side of things and didn't even try to find out if her version of Shyam's truth is the real truth. He deserves to pine for the woman he loves and wallow in repentance and guilt over what he out her through and his heartlessness...

There's so much feeling and emotion in your writing, its like I can actually feel what arnav and khushi are feeling as they speak! I'm really really looking forward to the next part!
Just one tiny thing though...I wonder why she was looking for arnav😆😆
and I came to find you. What are you doing with NK?"

Thanks for the PM😊
Please please please please please please!!!!! Update Sooon!!!
 Can't wait...

Why was she looking for Arnav?

Maybe to tell him she wanted to leave ...
Maybe to ask him some questions about her missing memory ...

We will never know *dramatic sigh* 😛