Originally posted by: Moksha51Wonderful Dia.. This bring us to ask.. WWAD to stop Khushi.. I am assuming Amezing builders aren't going to make an appearance π
Originally posted by: serendipityloveAwesome Diya!!!!!!
I loved it...The way you blended the happenings on the show with your own story has brought a heady mix of intensity and emotion that the show didn't have after the kidnapping track...
This is exactly what I wanted...Khushi to leave him when the 6 months ended...
Arnav felt as though the bottom had just dropped out of his world. This was the one thing he had most feared would happen
Thats exactly what he deserves...He never told her the reason for the marriage, never heard her side of things and didn't even try to find out if her version of Shyam's truth is the real truth. He deserves to pine for the woman he loves and wallow in repentance and guilt over what he out her through and his heartlessness...
There's so much feeling and emotion in your writing, its like I can actually feel what arnav and khushi are feeling as they speak! I'm really really looking forward to the next part!
Just one tiny thing though...I wonder why she was looking for arnavππ
and I came to find you. What are you doing with NK?"
Thanks for the PMπ
Please please please please please please!!!!! Update Sooon!!!
Can't wait...
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