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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guruandkratz

This is amazing work Rashee...loving it!!!!

That explains the prologue and I can understand Arpita's guilt...amazing!

Beautifully written...please do continue soon!Clap

May I have a PM??

sure..im UPDATING NOW..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
emotional one once again !

hope it gets more lively rashee !!

I feel sorry for arpita and know how she feels .. !

great update once again !

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
                     PART - 4

Happy Birthday to u...Happy Birthday to u..Happy Birthday Dear Aarthi..Happy Birthday to u...*claps*.

Thank u thank u..

okay okay make a wish..

okay..she then wishes...i wish my mumma and papa will be with me forever..

okay..lets eat the cake...


*after some time*

the warden came running to aarthi's class room..

miss shobah..miss shobah..

yes ram dulare..

 aarthi's mother is admitted in the hospital..she is serious..she called for aarthi..

what..OMG..i will take her to the hospital right away..which hospital she is admitted in??

city hospital..'

okay..

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Aarthi..Aarthi beta.

Mumma what happend to u..mumma..why are u here..Oh no..mumma u have blood coming from ur mouth..

Beta..pls..dont cry..m..my time has come beta..im ..im just going back to the one who created me...

Mumma..u will come  back na...u will come back soon na..

aarthi..how did u come here..said prakash..

aarthi go ..go out now..he screamed in anger..

prakash no..i want to see her..i want to die in her arms..pls prakash..wont u do this for me..pls..

but priya she is a child...

but prakash why are u not understanding me..

mr.prakash .. interrupted the doctor..

im very sorry ...we cant save ur wife..she will only breathe for few mins..and haan..we have examined her and found that she have not eaten the medicine given to her,,

but doctor..i check her every time..she always has her medicine and then only she sleeps..

mr prakash we have checked her..there is no sign of improvement..can u pls show me the medicine..

prakash shows her the medicine..

mr.prakash..this is not the medicine we asked her to consume..

what..this is what u gave us..

no sir..this is diabetes tablet..not cancer..im very sorry for u sir..we tried all the ways to save her..but it seems we cant do anything now..

the doctor leaves..prakash started sobbing..

prakash..can u pls bring aarthi ..i want to see her..

prakash silently rises and brings aarthi in..Mumma..u will come back na..

no beta..but i will be with u itsef..i will be in ur heart..beta now listen to me carefully..

what mumma..

Beta..u must always listen to ur papa..and do not disobey him..okay..u must be friendly with others..and most importantly do not give up in any matters...follow ur heart beta and do not let break any one's trust..

mumma..i will surely listen to u.. but mumma why are u not coming back..mumma answer me na..mumma...

there was no respond..

papa..mumma slept..i will give her a kissi and go so that i may not disturb her...okay.

prakash who was crying queitly looked aarthi and then at priya..
he  could not control anymore so he walked out from the room..

.i know mumma will back..speciallly for me..

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AFTER 8 YEARS..

Ma..why are u not coming back??..pappa is not talking to me like he used to do before..he is ignoring me ma..he is drinking very badly ma..most of the time he is not in the house and im getting scared ma..ma..dadi ma has decided papa to get married again..but i dont want papa to do it..Dadi ma is again behaving very rude to me..she is insulting me in front of everyone..she is telling bad things about me to everyone..and i cant say anything against her because papa said not to talk against dadi ma...she is telling u died because of me..ma...tell me is this the truth..did ..did i kill u..did i??..papa is not going for work recently 3-4 years..because of this we are forced to live in poverty..i was taken from my school and now im studying in goverment school and im paying my own fees...I heard Dadi ma saying papa to put me in the orphanage..ma i want everything to be normal again..pls ma..it will happen only if u come back pls ma..pls come back..

she broke down crying..her heart was paining severely..she was not able to tolerate this torture..

she saw a rope lying on the table...

thanks for reading..sending PM's now..sorry..i will try to make the next few updates lively



Edited by ksfan2 - 15 April 2013 at 10:08am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
this was more emotional than i thought Rashee..

Priya died :( leaving Aarti with her so called dad..

He is a retard!!.. he needs to get a wife!.. true dat G3!

NO NO NO ROPE!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yaarti.mini

this was more emotional than i thought Rashee..

Priya died :( leaving Aarti with her so called dad..

He is a retard!!.. he needs to get a wife!.. true dat G3!

NO NO NO ROPE!

thanks for commenting yaarti..sorry..coz the next few updates will be based on aarti's and arpita's suferings...after that the story will spice up...SmileSmileWink

well yes...prakash actually did not have any fatherly feelings for aarthi from the beginning..he was pretending to be nice because of priya...so after priya's death he barely cared for aarthi..and yeah..there is no g3 yet..dadi ma is prakash's mother..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:35am | IP Logged
nice update rasheeClap

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poonamgarg

nice update rasheeClap

thank u poonam diBig smile
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Rashee i just came across this story & read all 4 parts at one go

such a emotional phase is going onCry

poor anu aka aarti away from her real parents & now her new mother is also no more , her new father is being ignorant towards herCry
my heart cries for her

i even feel bad for arpita. poor girl- her guilt is biting her. a wound on her heart which will never be healed.

last line of last part is scaring me. is she going to  attempt suicide ???Shocked

by the way i loved aarti's real name - anushka .it's a sweet name
loving ur updates nicely written Clap

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